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Poetry in motion with all of my emotion.
Sunning to the toons of a Jamican island, so stunning. Beauty is all around tan bodies all moving to the sound. Barefoot and bare chested, the best I had expected. Bodies all at play with waves pounding the sand all day. If only I was really at this place. Instead of just day dreaming with a smile on my face.
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Oh i need 2 take a trip like that be it for real or a dream!
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I agree with teagle! You have created some nice imagery
and I love using internal rhyme like you have done here
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Thanks guys and one day I WILL LIVE THIS VISION!
And if im still on here,,I "WILL" take and send pictures,wink,lol,lol
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You are Loved Terry ((((
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and I love using internal rhyme like you have done here