Topic: Day Dreaming
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Sun 07/27/08 09:25 AM
Poetry in motion with all of my emotion.
Sunning to the toons of a Jamican island, so stunning.
Beauty is all around tan bodies all moving to the sound.
Barefoot and bare chested, the best I had expected.
Bodies all at play with waves pounding the sand all day.
If only I was really at this place.
Instead of just day dreaming with a smile on my face.:cry:
:heart: drinker :heart: drinker :heart: drinker :wink:

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Sun 07/27/08 09:32 AM
Oh i need 2 take a trip like that be it for real or a dream!

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Sun 07/27/08 09:50 AM
I agree with teagle! You have created some nice imagery devil and I love using internal rhyme like you have done here :smile:

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Sun 07/27/08 10:11 AM
drinker Thanks guys and one day I WILL LIVE THIS VISION!

And if im still on here,,I "WILL" take and send pictures,wink,lol,loldrinker drinker drinker :wink: laugh

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Tue 07/29/08 12:15 AM
You are Loved Terry ((((:heart: ))))

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