Topic: I Love You Times the Square Root of Infinity
d4tc's photo
Sun 07/27/08 01:19 AM
I know
I know
I know

The title sounds gimmicky

My ex made that up

Quick!
Give me a remedy!

Oh, the humility!
It's killing me!

Not literally
Funny to see
How times change

How the
'I Love You's'
Are not all the same
All the time

I remember I lied too

I repeated your words;

I Love You
Times the Square Root
of Infinity


Good thing you thought that up

I would have meant it had I any
less mind to think of that
incoherenly invested gesture
On MY own

Why is my body in shakes
Where is my placidity!

My nerves nerves are pulling
all the other nerves on to
the dance floor

Hands shoved in deep pockets
we don't know the answers
Searching for the cures
through loose change

and a broken wallet
What do we find?

Nothing
a little money
couldn't fix

For the see it
to believe it
Believers

lgo's photo
Sun 07/27/08 01:21 AM
flowerforyou

no photo
Sun 07/27/08 01:26 AM
that was wonderful..it was simple, yet it has put a smile on my face =)

PoeticMaster's photo
Sun 07/27/08 01:27 AM

I know
I know
I know

The title sounds gimmicky

My ex made that up

Quick!
Give me a remedy!

Oh, the humility!
It's killing me!

Not literally
Funny to see
How times change

How the
'I Love You's'
Are not all the same
All the time

I remember I lied too

I repeated your words;

I Love You
Times the Square Root
of Infinity


Good thing you thought that up

I would have meant it had I any
less mind to think of that
incoherenly invested gesture
On MY own

Why is my body in shakes
Where is my placidity!

My nerves nerves are pulling
all the other nerves on to
the dance floor

Hands shoved in deep pockets
we don't know the answers
Searching for the cures
through loose change

and a broken wallet
What do we find?

Nothing
a little money
couldn't fix

For the see it
to believe it
Believers


The plunge is a frightful happening when the abyss looks so much like the precipice of fullfillent. The question remains can you be the highwire act without a net or not? bigsmile well done, J!

myanimalcracker's photo
Sun 07/27/08 01:34 AM
I know why you said you weren't sure whether I'd like it or not. I love it...very sad, though, seeing as the square root of infinity doesn't exist.

Then again, I might be the one who's too perceptive this time flowerforyou flowerforyou

:heart:


LAMom's photo
Sun 07/27/08 12:06 PM

I know
I know
I know

The title sounds gimmicky

My ex made that up

Quick!
Give me a remedy!

Oh, the humility!
It's killing me!

Not literally
Funny to see
How times change

How the
'I Love You's'
Are not all the same
All the time

I remember I lied too

I repeated your words;

I Love You
Times the Square Root
of Infinity


Good thing you thought that up

I would have meant it had I any
less mind to think of that
incoherenly invested gesture
On MY own

Why is my body in shakes
Where is my placidity!

My nerves nerves are pulling
all the other nerves on to
the dance floor

Hands shoved in deep pockets
we don't know the answers
Searching for the cures
through loose change

and a broken wallet
What do we find?

Nothing
a little money
couldn't fix

For the see it
to believe it
Believers


flowerforyou :heart:

jimz's photo
Sun 07/27/08 02:54 PM

I know
I know
I know

The title sounds gimmicky

My ex made that up

Quick!
Give me a remedy!

Oh, the humility!
It's killing me!

Not literally
Funny to see
How times change

How the
'I Love You's'
Are not all the same
All the time

I remember I lied too

I repeated your words;

I Love You
Times the Square Root
of Infinity


Good thing you thought that up

I would have meant it had I any
less mind to think of that
incoherenly invested gesture
On MY own

Why is my body in shakes
Where is my placidity!

My nerves nerves are pulling
all the other nerves on to
the dance floor

Hands shoved in deep pockets
we don't know the answers
Searching for the cures
through loose change

and a broken wallet
What do we find?

Nothing
a little money
couldn't fix

For the see it
to believe it
Believers


when i read this
it came out
as a song

cool
too
cool

no photo
Mon 07/28/08 08:56 AM
J-there is a greeting card out there that says I love you to infinity plus one- close enough?bigsmile bigsmile