Topic: Create a Creature
d4tc's photo
Sat 07/26/08 09:25 AM
Edited by d4tc on Sat 07/26/08 09:28 AM
Line the inside walls of me
With propable - profitable - information
Knowledgeable - logical - implications
Stop hiding behind what lies
beneath each layer


Covering up the truth
Covers up the skin

The skin hides the muscle
The muscle looks up to the skin

One of those
Muscle see
Muscle does

Wow now
Watch out
Here they come
The archealogists
To dig up the evidence

They do this

They found a pigeons toe
A zebra tail and an alligator
Or crocidles shell to play with

They put this together and
tossed it in the museum of tolerance
or museum of ignorance
To me these are one in the same


Searching
I found
A real reason
To use the word
Flabergasted
Learning scrupulous findings
Found from back whence
A true provenance existed
A va=Providence encrypted


From these findings
We find bone collectors
Known as man
Know how to make new species
Out of old bones


Crippling facts swell up

The rheumatoid arthritis
The worst kind of arthritis
Never stops
It just goes dormant from
Time to time if we are lucky

It's that pain in my foot
The dirty foot beats
The pulse beats
A dead horse
To death

Putting this foot
to rest would be great
Out of mysery
When no one
seems to have
A real gun
We comprimise
When we think
On our own

Now enter
In here
Negligence
A beast untamed
Never explained
What can it do?

I will tell you

It bites you on the neck
Sucking you blue to bruise
A control issue applies
Tacky marks on
eachothers necks

I grab my umbrella
My umbrella blocks sun
My umbrella shields rain
Two in one - One in the same

The shampoo and conditior
Roll down the skull around
Every side of my brain

Just not inside





s1owhand's photo
Sat 07/26/08 09:34 AM
drinker

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myanimalcracker's photo
Sat 07/26/08 09:36 AM
Very nice.

no photo
Sat 07/26/08 09:40 AM
Jason, what a brilliant mind you havebigsmile

d4tc's photo
Sat 07/26/08 09:57 AM
Edited by d4tc on Sat 07/26/08 09:57 AM
Thanks S1ow flowerforyou Kat drinker Pkd drinker
laugh laugh laugh



Jason, what a brilliant mind you havebigsmile


Wow! Way Too Kind! blushing

PoeticMaster's photo
Sat 07/26/08 10:32 AM
yes J that mind of yours is clever and the implications
inscribed within the words is 3 and 4 fold :smile: I love metaphoric let the reader interpt the piece as sees fit, make it theirs! bravo bro! drinks

d4tc's photo
Sat 07/26/08 12:37 PM
Thank you Poetic Master! drinker :smile: