Topic: imperfect
DirkGently's photo
Wed 07/23/08 10:51 AM
Edited by DirkGently on Wed 07/23/08 10:51 AM
you show me yours, i'll show you mine
these imperfections we try to hide
tell me what you fear the most
and what it is you cannot stand
about yourself, those habits that
have developed into obsessions
what makes you cry when you're alone
what makes you run from love and what
you wish you could do if only stronger
what you hope no one else will notice
the past missteps you cannot shake
throw them here upon the table
maybe the light and air will kill them
maybe you'll feel a little better
when i pile my load next to yours
and show you that we all are perfect
because we are so imperfect.

no photo
Wed 07/23/08 10:53 AM
Very good! flowerforyou
I'm just queer about flabby-ing from old age, old bad eating habits, and faded stretch marks. If someone can't stand my innards, they are really missing out, and if they can't stand my outards, don't want them anyway, either!! I YAM WHO I YAM!! drinker

lurchs_sister's photo
Wed 07/23/08 10:54 AM
BRAVO!!!!!

This is an amazing piece of heart you have laid before all of us... Thank you Dirk!flowers

ElaineSeekingJerry's photo
Wed 07/23/08 10:55 AM
Wouldn't that be a relief - to be able to just unburden ourselves of the insecurities and self-doubt? To know that all our 'dark' would be received with as open arms as our 'light'?

Thank you for that ...

DirkGently's photo
Wed 07/23/08 10:55 AM
i have many weight issues and a strong fear of failure myself

lurchs_sister's photo
Wed 07/23/08 10:57 AM
Dirk... I bared my soul in two poems I wrote here a while back but just as a refresher the titles are... They Say I'm Bipolar and Bi-cycle

d4tc's photo
Wed 07/23/08 11:32 AM
Good Write. happy drinker

LAMom's photo
Wed 07/23/08 12:20 PM
flowerforyou I've come to love the Imperfections of Me,,,
I like to think of it as Imperfect is the New In thingyyyyyyy

:wink: flowerforyou

jimz's photo
Wed 07/23/08 12:24 PM
liked it, great write!

AngelLight's photo
Wed 07/23/08 12:28 PM
Great write....And I just love the last line "and show you that we all are perfect
because we are so imperfect."

flowers Flowers at your feet...

DirkGently's photo
Wed 07/23/08 09:14 PM
thank you all...now if i could only take my own advice...