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starlynsangel Joined Fri 06/27/08 Posts: 729	Tue 07/22/08 01:27 PM
Now when I'm alone I look up at the sky...and into your eyes I never knew I would feel this way but you've captivated me now...foreverandaday You have a place in my sky... a place in my heart... I can't even imagine a night without you in my life. Now when I'm alone I look up at the sky...and into your eyes but I am not alone for my eyes and your eyes are shining bright in my sky...in my heart...foreverandaday...in my night... shining bright

CyPoet Joined Fri 01/11/08 Posts: 12494	Tue 07/22/08 01:32 PM
Beautiful expression sweetheart.;)

Nova86 Joined Sun 06/29/08 Posts: 4547	Tue 07/22/08 03:33 PM
madam, i am the one that is captivated....by your beauty, both inside and out you write so eloquently....thank you cutie

Unknow Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Tue 07/22/08 03:48 PM
Well done!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 07/22/08 03:49 PM


starlynsangel Joined Fri 06/27/08 Posts: 729	Tue 07/22/08 06:18 PM
Thank you

Nova86 Joined Sun 06/29/08 Posts: 4547	Tue 07/22/08 07:24 PM
shine bright you do my lady....lighting up my life

starlynsangel Joined Fri 06/27/08 Posts: 729	Tue 07/22/08 07:31 PM
shine bright you do my lady....lighting up my life and you...in mine

chuck366 Joined Tue 10/16/07 Posts: 4666	Tue 07/22/08 07:32 PM
Now when I'm alone I look up at the sky...and into your eyes I never knew I would feel this way but you've captivated me now...foreverandaday You have a place in my sky... a place in my heart... I can't even imagine a night without you in my life. Now when I'm alone I look up at the sky...and into your eyes but I am not alone for my eyes and your eyes are shining bright in my sky...in my heart...foreverandaday...in my night... shining bright very nice

starlynsangel Joined Fri 06/27/08 Posts: 729	Wed 07/23/08 06:55 AM
Thank You...

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Wed 07/23/08 09:30 AM
"i like that"

starlynsangel Joined Fri 06/27/08 Posts: 729	Wed 07/23/08 01:07 PM
Thanks...

starlynsangel Joined Fri 06/27/08 Posts: 729	Thu 07/24/08 11:00 AM
Now when I'm alone I look up at the sky...and into your eyes I never knew I would feel this way but you've captivated me now...foreverandaday You have a place in my sky... a place in my heart... I can't even imagine a night without you in my life. Now when I'm alone I look up at the sky...and into your eyes but I am not alone for my eyes and your eyes are shining bright in my sky...in my heart...foreverandaday...in my night... shining bright I was captivating with my smile...while you captivated my heart

PoeticMaster Joined Fri 07/18/08 Posts: 411	Thu 07/24/08 11:27 AM
lovely!

Nova86 Joined Sun 06/29/08 Posts: 4547	Thu 07/24/08 12:51 PM
Now when I'm alone I look up at the sky...and into your eyes I never knew I would feel this way but you've captivated me now...foreverandaday You have a place in my sky... a place in my heart... I can't even imagine a night without you in my life. Now when I'm alone I look up at the sky...and into your eyes but I am not alone for my eyes and your eyes are shining bright in my sky...in my heart...foreverandaday...in my night... shining bright I was captivating with my smile...while you captivated my heart well put my shining beauty

starlynsangel Joined Fri 06/27/08 Posts: 729	Thu 07/24/08 02:06 PM
meant every word, my "radiant" Nova

Nova86 Joined Sun 06/29/08 Posts: 4547	Fri 07/25/08 10:50 AM
too sweet

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 07/25/08 11:35 AM
starlyn, i love this write

starlynsangel Joined Fri 06/27/08 Posts: 729	Fri 07/25/08 01:19 PM
starlyn, i love this write Thank you so much "Angel"