Topic: The Silent Clock | |
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My hands are still
Stiff as the metal to which they embrace Not a movement nor a sound As my gears lay rusty in rot I am the Silent Clock. My opperations are a mess My pieces do not fit I am forever broken An icon for what was and what is left I, am the silent clock. Dust collects upon my outer ridges As I lay here so desperately needing an escape from my prison Forever and always Missing the piece in which you have stolen And until you return to me and make me whole once more I will remain the Silent Clock. |
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good write, welcome
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Affectively moving ....great analogy
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Loved it! It really spoke to me.
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great job
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Welcome to the poetry section, good write!
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This has made me feel like you crawled into my head and heart and wrote down exactly what I am feeling and can't voice.
Amazing |
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thanks alot you guys really appretiate it
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