Topic: The Silent Clock
anonymous326's photo
Thu 07/17/08 01:42 AM
My hands are still
Stiff as the metal to which they embrace
Not a movement nor a sound
As my gears lay rusty in rot
I am the Silent Clock.

My opperations are a mess
My pieces do not fit
I am forever broken
An icon for what was and what is left
I, am the silent clock.

Dust collects upon my outer ridges
As I lay here so desperately needing an escape from my prison
Forever and always
Missing the piece in which you have stolen
And until you return to me and make me whole once more
I will remain the Silent Clock.

pkh's photo
Thu 07/17/08 07:17 AM
good write, welcome

AngelLight's photo
Thu 07/17/08 10:17 AM
Affectively moving ....great analogy flowerforyou

Beth1968's photo
Thu 07/17/08 07:05 PM
Loved it! It really spoke to me.

TwilightsTwin's photo
Thu 07/17/08 07:12 PM
great job

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 07/18/08 08:45 AM
Welcome to the poetry section, good write!
flowerforyou

no photo
Fri 07/18/08 08:51 AM
drinker :smile: drinker

LAMom's photo
Fri 07/18/08 10:48 AM
flowers

magicalgreen35's photo
Mon 07/28/08 10:17 PM
This has made me feel like you crawled into my head and heart and wrote down exactly what I am feeling and can't voice.

Amazing


s1owhand's photo
Mon 07/28/08 10:17 PM
bigsmile

anonymous326's photo
Tue 07/29/08 03:26 AM
thanks alot you guys really appretiate it:smile: