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Topic: SO FAR AWAY!!!!
crazysillygirl Joined Mon 01/29/07 Posts: 4869	Sun 07/13/08 04:34 PM
so far away.... i long to hold you... kiss you... touch you... whisper to you and hear your whispers... but your so far away i long to look in your eyes and feel your thoughts... taste your skin beneath my lips... feel you watch me from across the room.... cuddle you long into the night.... walk with you beneath a starry sky.... but your so far away CSG 2008

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Megan_Smiles Joined Tue 04/08/08 Posts: 526	Sun 07/13/08 04:41 PM
I know how you feel honey. That was beautiful

crazysillygirl Joined Mon 01/29/07 Posts: 4869	Sun 07/13/08 04:43 PM
THANK YOU GUYS!!!!

johnboy072472 Joined Fri 12/28/07 Posts: 4874	Sun 07/13/08 04:45 PM
so far away.... i long to hold you... kiss you... touch you... whisper to you and hear your whispers... but your so far away i long to look in your eyes and feel your thoughts... taste your skin beneath my lips... feel you watch me from across the room.... cuddle you long into the night.... walk with you beneath a starry sky.... but your so far away CSG 2008 TONYA.......

flame1cutie Joined Thu 04/24/08 Posts: 7307	Sun 07/13/08 04:50 PM
that was awsome

robert1652 Joined Wed 11/14/07 Posts: 8447	Sun 07/13/08 04:58 PM
So far away, doesn't anybody stay in one place anymore? It would be so fine to see your face at my door Doesn't help to know you're just time away Long ago I reached for you and there you stood Holding you again could only do me good How I wish I could, but you're so far away One more song about movin' along the highway Can't say much of anything that's new If I coild only work this life out my way I'd rather spend in bein' close to you. But you're so far away, doesn't anybody stay in one place anymore It would be so fine to see your face at my door Doesn't help to know you're so far away

crazysillygirl Joined Mon 01/29/07 Posts: 4869	Sun 07/13/08 05:23 PM
So far away, doesn't anybody stay in one place anymore? It would be so fine to see your face at my door Doesn't help to know you're just time away Long ago I reached for you and there you stood Holding you again could only do me good How I wish I could, but you're so far away One more song about movin' along the highway Can't say much of anything that's new If I coild only work this life out my way I'd rather spend in bein' close to you. But you're so far away, doesn't anybody stay in one place anymore It would be so fine to see your face at my door Doesn't help to know you're so far away MY FAVORITE SONG BY CAROL KING......GLAD TO KNOW SOMEONE ELSE APPRECIATES HER AND IT!!!

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sun 07/13/08 10:09 PM
ALong distance sucks doesn't it? I know how you feel. Good write.

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Mon 07/14/08 03:23 AM
"i like that"

johnboy072472 Joined Fri 12/28/07 Posts: 4874	Mon 07/14/08 09:33 AM
so far away.... i long to hold you... kiss you... touch you... whisper to you and hear your whispers... but your so far away i long to look in your eyes and feel your thoughts... taste your skin beneath my lips... feel you watch me from across the room.... cuddle you long into the night.... walk with you beneath a starry sky.... but your so far away CSG 2008

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Mon 07/14/08 09:51 AM
Nicely done

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 07/14/08 05:30 PM