I took something that sacred
Knowing I was the first to rape it
Only we were in love
At a fast pace kid
As if by a race of hearts
Made it
Un-virginized, De-virginized,
Undies sliding down her waist
Passing thighs
Over knees
Down ankles
Off feet
The suprised
Look in her eyes
Pulling those panties down
Her
Clean cut stems
Pulled me toward her cleavage
I could taste it
Just couldn't believe it
Birthday not
Christmas not
Just found her at the right time
Touching the wrong spot
From the front door the the back door
Checking out the plumbing
Fingers running
Seemed tight at first
Intervening disperse by her
When I flipped the script
That told me to stay away from
Her gloots this night
It made sense
Front door
Bedroom floor
Two bodies
Awaiting suspense
Two new drips for her
Me not going limp
Never given a reason
Not to release
This tension
She screams crimson
Dry drip
Cuddling
Laughing to The Simpsons

it just got hot in here Very nice sweets!

Thank you!

Oh my...

ahem...i need a smoke now

why did you have to rape? people use this word as if its ok to say they raped someone.

i hope you did not rape anyone because that is against the law.

Thank You TwilightsTwin and Bastet.

Bastet

uhhh.

I understand that rape is forcing to do something they do not want to do.

The next line explains it

"Only we were in Love"

When two people are in love with eachother. It's okay to rape one another. It just means they want eachother fast like. Hot and heavy. Yep, for the record. I have never, and I will never rape a woman. I would not even lay my hand on a woman if it's not in a loving manner. Just had to clear this up.

I think anyone who rapes someone should be punished to the fullest.


Thanks for the comment Maureeno

I think anyone who rapes someone should be punished to the fullest.


Thanks for the comment Maureeno




its ok d4dc. i understand the difference but sometimes there are kids/teenagers on this site and they might not read it the way it was meant to be read so its good you clarified.

I try to think along the lines of a Disney movie when I write. It doesn't always work. Especially when using a word so direct.

The thing I like about Disney.
Disney can make a movie that has clean good humor for kids and not-so-clean humor for the grown ups.

Only with any luck the parents will understand all the humor where as the kids should only understand the kid humor that was intended for them.

Not the adult humor that entices parents to take their kids to see these movies.

Hey that's a great approach to it...I never thought of that...great thinkin sweets.

I totally agree. Great write!!! I love your style.