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Very touching...And very well written. 
Thank you CantonGal.... 
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"what can he gain
from hurting a body so small so fragile....?" He gains Pain Unashamed Reel images toiling Projector boiling Hate He learns Hot burns Cold shoulders Rewinding Replaying Rehating Repeating What he learned Nice Write Wiz! Magical as always.  
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little lost used abused confused no understanding of how and why she's the unwilling recipient of pain... what can he gain from hurting a body so small so fragile....? and he smiles all the while as he inflicts his twisted on an ... and the years go by ... after a while her tears fade her eyes dulled, decades older than her age lifeless and sorrowful in a face so unlined so small and solemn ... yet every now and then a dim light flashes like a candle flickering in the wind and her face raises up yearning quietly begging ... for a loving comforting ear who will hear her silent cries and offer her that which was so brutally and forcefully torn from her small ill used body and spirit... ... childhood ... shoot, its too early to be crying, nice write, dear, rings very true what a abused child goes through
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"what can he gain from hurting a body so small so fragile....?" He gains Pain Unashamed Reel images toiling Projector boiling Hate He learns Hot burns Cold shoulders Rewinding Replaying Rehating Repeating What he learned Nice Write Wiz! Magical as always.
Thank you sweetie
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little lost used abused confused no understanding of how and why she's the unwilling recipient of pain... what can he gain from hurting a body so small so fragile....? and he smiles all the while as he inflicts his twisted on an ... and the years go by ... after a while her tears fade her eyes dulled, decades older than her age lifeless and sorrowful in a face so unlined so small and solemn ... yet every now and then a dim light flashes like a candle flickering in the wind and her face raises up yearning quietly begging ... for a loving comforting ear who will hear her silent cries and offer her that which was so brutally and forcefully torn from her small ill used body and spirit... ... childhood ... shoot, its too early to be crying, nice write, dear, rings very true what a abused child goes through
Dont cry chickabee...that's why we write about it...keep it out there in the open so those nasty abusers know we are watching them!
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Beautiful write
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I can feel that. I hope everybody can. Denise has got my mind geared that way these days and I belong to a poets against child abuse group that's in full force right now.....thanks for reading John...
Children need all the help they can get. |
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Ohhh How very well written!
Great write!!
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little girl lost used abused confused no understanding of how and why she's the unwilling recipient of pain... what can he gain from hurting a body so small so fragile....? and he smiles all the while as he inflicts his twisted fantasies on an innocent ... and the years go by ... after a while her tears fade her eyes dulled, decades older than her age lifeless and sorrowful in a face so unlined so small and solemn ... yet every now and then a dim light flashes like a candle flickering in the wind and her face raises up yearning quietly begging ... for a loving comforting ear who will hear her silent cries and offer her that which was so brutally and forcefully torn from her small ill used body and spirit... ... childhood ... And help her wipe her tear filled eyes. To set and talk all about the bad that was felt to make sure she feels her tiny pieces torn, all melt. And mold back into her heart, never again to be torn apart. And to stand behind her future, always there to nuture. Let her mind and heart be set free, to always be glee. To carry our bond through time, here in this ryhme.
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A helping Soul A loving Heart Lifted Light She Speaks I hear Love you (((( Alicia )))) 
Denise my huge hearted friend whom I never get to chat with often enough, I love and admire you and your beautiful soul....
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh Lovely My world is on fast forward,,, I promise when I come down to breath We will chat,,, I love you Beautiful, and your soul make my Heart sing,,
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Beautiful write
Thank you sweetpea~
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very emotionally stirring and written beautifully...well done
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Ohhh How very well written! Great write!!
Thank you sugar....
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little girl lost used abused confused no understanding of how and why she's the unwilling recipient of pain... what can he gain from hurting a body so small so fragile....? and he smiles all the while as he inflicts his twisted fantasies on an innocent ... and the years go by ... after a while her tears fade her eyes dulled, decades older than her age lifeless and sorrowful in a face so unlined so small and solemn ... yet every now and then a dim light flashes like a candle flickering in the wind and her face raises up yearning quietly begging ... for a loving comforting ear who will hear her silent cries and offer her that which was so brutally and forcefully torn from her small ill used body and spirit... ... childhood ... And help her wipe her tear filled eyes. To set and talk all about the bad that was felt to make sure she feels her tiny pieces torn, all melt. And mold back into her heart, never again to be torn apart. And to stand behind her future, always there to nuture. Let her mind and heart be set free, to always be glee. To carry our bond through time, here in this ryhme.
Lovely as always my friend
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(((KID)))
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very emotionally stirring and written beautifully...well done Thank you so very much Nova
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A helping Soul A loving Heart Lifted Light She Speaks I hear Love you (((( Alicia ))))
Denise my huge hearted friend whom I never get to chat with often enough, I love and admire you and your beautiful soul....
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh Lovely My world is on fast forward,,, I promise when I come down to breath We will chat,,, I love you Beautiful, and your soul make my Heart sing,,
Take a deep breath Lovely Girl.....slow down and enjoy life darlling ... you are loved and valued~
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A sad commentary indeed but, nicely done Alicia
And thanks for the lump in my throat... |
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A sad commentary indeed but, nicely done Alicia And thanks for the lump in my throat... (((KC)))
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