Topic: Hunger. . . .
EvyT's photo
Thu 07/10/08 10:55 PM
Hello: I am new here. I am poet and would like to share. I've changed a few words in the piece due to the rules. . . . Hotep



Ravenous
The only words
Ever heard
Erotic....

A hungry coochie
Was all they knew
Never realized
The heart is far more famished
Than the organ between
A lonely lovers legs

The nymphs and maniacs
Were more than obsessively sexual
Overly concerned and focused
On a subject which most know no-thing of

Restless nights
With seraphim and nephlim
Watched as gold leaf feathered angels
Eventually turned their backs too
No longer privy to their message
Nor the secrets their dark chocolate porcelain skin held
Their eyes the colors of oceans
Were ports for the greatest of sages (filled with wisdom)....

A light that is all but a memory these days
Even they walked away
Without divulging the answer

A Conundrum
Questions repeat on a broken track
And combust like a bomb on borrowed time
Tick tock…tick tock....
BOOM!

Lost in the debris of misled chaos
The words no longer confluent
Scattered confetti
On crumbled worn sheets
Are torn ....
Then trashed....

Sometimes even when the coochie is fed
The heart is still left starving....
Makes many a human . . . . .Savages

Fighting for fullfillment
The answer to the question still a mystery. . . . .
(And what is the question, you ask?)

No food or drink can satisfy the thirst
(Only those who hunger Know). . .

neversurrender6's photo
Thu 07/10/08 10:56 PM
Hungry what?noway

robert1652's photo
Thu 07/10/08 10:58 PM
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EvyT's photo
Thu 07/10/08 11:00 PM
Thank you~

iRon's photo
Thu 07/10/08 11:00 PM
Welcome and have funnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.......i am now going to get a snack........

EvyT's photo
Thu 07/10/08 11:02 PM
LOL~ Thank you

d4tc's photo
Thu 07/10/08 11:53 PM
Very Nice! flowerforyou

Welcome to JSH. :smile:

LAMom's photo
Fri 07/11/08 11:18 AM
Welcome to JSH/Mingle2

Very Nice flowerforyou

EvyT's photo
Fri 07/11/08 02:02 PM
Thank you LAMom~

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Fri 07/11/08 02:06 PM
Welcome to mingle2/JSH......... You'll find there's a lot of great WORD WEAVERS here!!!
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