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Abracadabra
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Thu 07/03/08 04:22 PM
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Ephemeral lives are such and injustice
as nightmares of dying forever infest us our rhapsodic skills have finally possessed us to write down our thoughts to endure and attest us Our existence so brief it fills us with grief The sea of humanity, an ephemeral reef like a thief in the night the current brings blight with insurgent injustice that's devoid of contrite So we post all our poems for others to read in the hopes of creating a perpetual creed ephemeral life is injustice no more for our poetry spans from the future to yore ![]() Abra (07/03/08) |
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Abra : I thought you were sick . I am glad to see you writing . Best wishes for health , happiness and long life .
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nice write as usual abra
![]() sorry to hear that you are/were sick. hope your feeling better |
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Thank you Sam. I'm feeling better now.
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Edited by
Unknow
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Thu 07/03/08 04:14 PM
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Join the Writer's Club thread. John posts a new word and a writer's challenge every day. His challenge actually inspired this poem, but after I wrote it I thought I'd post it on the open forum too. ![]() http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/133763?page=12 In fact, when you learn a new word the best way to really drive it home is to write a little ditty about it. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Join the Writer's Club thread. John posts a new word and a writer's challenge every day. His challenge actually inspired this poem, but after I wrote it I thought I'd post it on the open forum too. ![]() http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/133763?page=12 In fact, when you learn a new word the best way to really drive it home is to write a little ditty about it. I went there it's still under JSH, they're not updating that to mingle2? |
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I went there it's still under JSH, they're not updating that to mingle2? I'm sorry, I use JustSayHi.com cause I like the look of it so that's why my link went there. It's on mingle2 too. ![]() http://mingle2.com/topic/show/133763?page=12 |
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Ephemeral lives are such and injustice as nightmares of dying forever infest us our rhapsodic skills have finally possessed us to write down our thoughts to endure and attest us Our existence so brief it fills us with grief The sea of humanity, an ephemeral reef like a thief in the night the current brings blight with insurgent injustice that's devoid of contrite So we post all our poems for others to read in the hopes of creating a perpetual creed ephemeral life is injustice no more for our poetry spans from the future to yore ![]() Abra (07/03/08) Yep,, Yepperssssssssssssssss I am liking this ![]() |
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It has a big fat typo in the very first line.
![]() It should be "an injustice" not "and injustice" Typos are such an injustice. ![]() |
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