Topic: Ephemeral Lives
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Thu 07/03/08 03:53 PM
Edited by Abracadabra on Thu 07/03/08 04:22 PM
Ephemeral lives are such and injustice
as nightmares of dying forever infest us
our rhapsodic skills have finally possessed us
to write down our thoughts to endure and attest us

Our existence so brief it fills us with grief
The sea of humanity, an ephemeral reef
like a thief in the night the current brings blight
with insurgent injustice that's devoid of contrite

So we post all our poems for others to read
in the hopes of creating a perpetual creed
ephemeral life is injustice no more
for our poetry spans from the future to yore

flowerforyou

Abra (07/03/08)

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Thu 07/03/08 03:56 PM
Abra : I thought you were sick . I am glad to see you writing . Best wishes for health , happiness and long life .flowerforyou waving waving .

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Thu 07/03/08 03:57 PM
nice write as usual abra flowerforyou

sorry to hear that you are/were sick. hope your feeling better

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Thu 07/03/08 03:58 PM
Thank you Sam. I'm feeling better now. glasses

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Thu 07/03/08 04:14 PM
Edited by Unknow on Thu 07/03/08 04:14 PM
happy Good to see you on line my magical friend.
drinker Tea and krumpets to you. Great write as usual flowerforyou How true,although i still have to look up some words, as usual laugh

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Thu 07/03/08 04:20 PM

happy Good to see you on line my magical friend.
drinker Tea and krumpets to you. Great write as usual flowerforyou How true,although i still have to look up some words, as usual laugh


Join the Writer's Club thread. John posts a new word and a writer's challenge every day. His challenge actually inspired this poem, but after I wrote it I thought I'd post it on the open forum too. bigsmile

http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/133763?page=12

In fact, when you learn a new word the best way to really drive it home is to write a little ditty about it.

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Thu 07/03/08 04:30 PM


happy Good to see you on line my magical friend.
drinker Tea and krumpets to you. Great write as usual flowerforyou How true,although i still have to look up some words, as usual laugh


Join the Writer's Club thread. John posts a new word and a writer's challenge every day. His challenge actually inspired this poem, but after I wrote it I thought I'd post it on the open forum too. bigsmile

http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/133763?page=12

In fact, when you learn a new word the best way to really drive it home is to write a little ditty about it.



I went there it's still under JSH, they're not updating that to mingle2?

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Thu 07/03/08 04:36 PM

I went there it's still under JSH, they're not updating that to mingle2?


I'm sorry, I use JustSayHi.com cause I like the look of it so that's why my link went there. It's on mingle2 too. bigsmile

http://mingle2.com/topic/show/133763?page=12


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Thu 07/03/08 04:46 PM
glasses cool! Although i like JSH better as a name for this site, anybody else feel this way? :heart:

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Thu 07/03/08 10:07 PM

Ephemeral lives are such and injustice
as nightmares of dying forever infest us
our rhapsodic skills have finally possessed us
to write down our thoughts to endure and attest us

Our existence so brief it fills us with grief
The sea of humanity, an ephemeral reef
like a thief in the night the current brings blight
with insurgent injustice that's devoid of contrite

So we post all our poems for others to read
in the hopes of creating a perpetual creed
ephemeral life is injustice no more
for our poetry spans from the future to yore

flowerforyou

Abra (07/03/08)



Yep,, Yepperssssssssssssssss I am liking this flowers

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Fri 07/04/08 12:36 AM
It has a big fat typo in the very first line. laugh

It should be "an injustice" not "and injustice"

Typos are such an injustice. grumble