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Topic: a loveless life..
tombraider Joined Wed 09/12/07 Posts: 5042	Tue 07/01/08 08:13 PM
a loveless life on a sea of dreams damaged,taking water on fast and though she struggles to row on her own not quick enough to escape from her past and soon the waves engulf her all her rowing is lost in vain calloused hands from the rowing impervious to the pain and as her vessel slowly capsizes and sinks to the ocean floor she drowns in her loveless sea by refusing to let go of the oars..... writings from the tombs.....

tombraider Joined Wed 09/12/07 Posts: 5042	Tue 07/01/08 08:30 PM
not one response..that's it..I QUIT..

rush2001 Joined Thu 04/17/08 Posts: 2577	Tue 07/01/08 08:31 PM
I loved it.

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Tue 07/01/08 08:32 PM
don't quit! it takes forever sometimes to get a response in the poetry forum.... anyway, i liked it ty tombraider

tombraider Joined Wed 09/12/07 Posts: 5042	Tue 07/01/08 08:37 PM
thank yall much..

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 07/01/08 09:22 PM
a loveless life on a sea of dreams damaged,taking water on fast and though she struggles to row on her own not quick enough to escape from her past and soon the waves engulf her all her rowing is lost in vain calloused hands from the rowing impervious to the pain and as her vessel slowly capsizes and sinks to the ocean floor she drowns in her loveless sea by refusing to let go of the oars..... writings from the tombs..... Humbling to say the least,,, Beautiful

Abracadabra Joined Thu 04/12/07 Posts: 17851	Tue 07/01/08 09:27 PM
I always think these poems are written by Tom Braider. Ok, it's Tomb Raider. I get it. Cool poem. When I first read the title of the thread I thought, Hmmmm? Someone wrote a poem about me.

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Wed 07/02/08 10:05 AM
You better never quit! I enjoy your writtings way to much and would miss them terribly! (((Tomb)))

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