A
Woman
Drinking
Too much
Feeling ugly
Some jerk says
"She's looking better"
"Very chavonistical"
I reply
Then reply
"Don't listen to him"
"You're sexy my friend"
Waving over the bartender
Ordering Water
Now looking like a father
On stage
Asking her age
"I am twenty one"
She sadly displays
Still young
Life barely begun
I see something in her eyes
More then eyes
It's what she see's
Me
Thirty One
Her
Twenty One
For me
A life long begun
Reaching for a thought
I drink the water
A good stall
I ask her for her age again
Feeling transparent
As if vodka looks like water
Where transparent
Meets translucent
Water is all the same color
Trying to recollect
The fact
She said
"I am twenty one"
Digesting the fact
I am not
Waving over the waiter
This will not due
Give me a real drink
Anything
I say
Anything
He said
Anything
I say again
Just then
He confirms
Again
As if
I have some nerve
About her
Whispering to me
About her being
On the rebound
I tell him
Don't worry
She might need
A friend
Or more
Just sit back
And watch me
Explore
And then
That was when
Stuff hit the fan
I couldnt stand
I hit the floor
Dancing
To the beat
Of Bouncers
Four limbs Scrambing
To get back on my feet
The bartender smacks the girl
Yelling cheat

very nice!

True life ? i liked it d4tc

omg ....some scenario....

reminds me of a time...

nice as usual...

Brilliant Write

No. I just made this up. I wanted to be in the story.

I certainly hope you bounced when they threw you out!! LOL
What a visual!

great visualization