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she didn't want to let it go
although it was ready dangling by the tiniest of fleshy threads she lost them before never enjoyed it, even though the rewards were great in the end sitting down to a dinner with dad her favorite, alfredo and chicken nuggets and peas watching that goofy movie for the umpteenth time then it happened. scoop, bite, chew, swallow oh! no! tears come quickly and in multitudes where there once was a baby tooth is now a gap, and the tooth went down with her last bite of noodles "will it hurt me?" "no, honey, you'll be fine" the flow of tears slows, but then eyes wide, and on the edge of a breakdown "what about the tooth fairy?!?!" dear tooth fairy, i accidently swallowed my tooth from j |
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nice write. sad but lovely. |
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Sweet
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it's not meant to be sad. just the reaction of a 6 year old to her loose tooth not going as planned. she came up with the idea for the note at the end by herself.
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brought back sweet memories
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thanks, everyone, i had fun with this
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