Topic: Smile Now, Cry Never
d4tc's photo
Sun 06/29/08 09:11 AM
Once I took my face off
I thought I would see bone
Not another mask shown
Fully grown in the physical
Can't say much about the mental
Maturity
Afterall
It's not always easy saving face
When you want to delete this place
Throwing away the unnecessary parts
The sadness
The madness
The baddest parts
I don't want
To front
You can take
Like the ugly face
All are capable to make
For fronts sake
I don't want to make
I want to shake
Off
Take off
Lift off
Give off a good aura
Without lipping off
Sipping off good vibes
Looking humble
Without flashing pride
Smiling wide
Taking a long stride
No mask to hide
True happiness
Smirks, quirks, the sappiest
Ways to save face
Wearing a crown
Without a frown
Smiling all across this town
Called face
From town to town
Face to face
Making the world
A better place

bluesunflower's photo
Sun 06/29/08 09:13 AM


nice
i always like you poems :smile: flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Sun 06/29/08 09:16 AM
Thank you bluesunflower!

Today feels like a GOOD day! bigsmile

bluesunflower's photo
Sun 06/29/08 09:19 AM


your very welcome flowerforyou

i hope to day is a good day for you.

myanimalcracker's photo
Sun 06/29/08 10:09 AM
:heart: :heart: Smile big, sweets.

AngelLight's photo
Sun 06/29/08 11:06 AM
Really like this one sweet J...especially the ending...

"I want to shake
Off
Take off
Lift off
Give off a good aura
Without lipping off
Sipping off good vibes
Looking humble
Without flashing pride
Smiling wide
Taking a long stride
No mask to hide
True happiness
Smirks, quirks, the sappiest
Ways to save face
Wearing a crown
Without a frown
Smiling all across this town
Called face
From town to town
Face to face
Making the world
A better place"


Somehow, within, I think you already have what u seek to be and make.

Great write...flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou Ty.

kc0003's photo
Sun 06/29/08 10:42 PM
nice write

no photo
Mon 06/30/08 10:24 AM
very nice
here's to having a great daybigsmile flowers

no photo
Mon 06/30/08 12:02 PM
I see alittle of myself in your words. Great writing.

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 06/30/08 12:36 PM
Always be yourself never try to be someone your not.flowers