Topic: Dream Shifting and Changing
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Wed 02/28/07 09:00 PM
I slip into the realm of dreams
Where all is not as it seems
Upon a purple horse I ride
With a six gun at my side
Annie Oakley I am not
Creeping goblins covered in snot
Chasing my feet as I run
Towards the blackening sun
Dream shifts and changes
I am standing before a coffin
People all around crying and grieving
I want to look inside and see who it is
But I am afraid
A sick and twisted voice in my ear
"Go on look, you will not be surprised"
So I let my gaze fall upon the body inside
It is me.....
Needles protruding from my arms
Covered in scars
Blackened eyes
It all comes as no surprise
And the dream shifts and changes once again
Standing on the edge of cliff
The sea surging and pulsating below
Steel gray skies
Clouding my eyes
Behind me he stands
Waiting for me to turn away
He calls my name
Dream shifts and changes yet again
I stand now beside a house on the plains
He is there once again
Standing by my side
Holding my hand
Whispering calming words in my ears
Dispelling all of my fears
Pulling me close to him
Holding me tight
Making it all feel so right
He speaks again
"Come inside doll
Where its warm
Let not the bad dreams take form
Come with me now
You know you belong"
In my sleep I cry out his name
Waking myself from these dreams
No longer filled with screams

Morena350's photo
Wed 02/28/07 09:01 PM
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TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 03/02/07 11:00 AM
Awwww g/f talking about pulling someone into your dream of dreams very
good one.flowerforyou

Cybear's photo
Fri 03/02/07 11:41 AM
Wow!this is a very compelling,ceaselessly ending journey into an
expansive and vast territory.The whole concept of dream shifting and
changing is incredible and opens up a whole realm of
possibilities.Depending on the readers perception there are two forces
or angels if you will at work here.However the frightening part of it is
that I detect an equally shared balance of power between the two.Thus
providing the bearer of these dreams to remain vigilant and ever
cautious.This rawks!gurlgriend.Godspeed!Cybear.
:smile: flowerforyou :tongue:
p.s.(phew)no six~shooters involved.(bear smiles):tongue:

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Fri 03/02/07 11:46 AM
WOW!
Very vivid and compelling...
flowerforyou drinker

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Fri 03/02/07 11:48 AM
EXCELLENT ... pulls the reader RIGHT into the word.... :)

sandylou2456's photo
Fri 03/02/07 12:17 PM




Wow! Poet...very nicely done. Very descriptive...
Thank you for sharing.flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Fri 03/02/07 12:20 PM
WoW !!!
You amaze me everytime I read your words
the power of you soul is incredible,,

whispertoascream's photo
Fri 03/02/07 12:32 PM
It felt like I was right there with you in that dream. Very well done.
Thank you.

Gryphyn's photo
Fri 03/02/07 06:56 PM
Looks to me your Soulmate is with you in your dreams. The neverending
strength they offer and shifting of times over the decades. I love this
one, it is quite unique.bigsmile

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Fri 03/02/07 07:22 PM
:heart: flowerforyou drinker :wink: :smile: :wink:
This changing in and out is like the many skins we lose and grow new
through our lives. Who are we to think that these dead
tissues were without thought of there on life-leaving them!!

Great trail of memories through the cells of time and souls!
:wink: flowerforyou smokin :heart:

herewego's photo
Sat 03/03/07 03:40 AM
poet.. you did it again. beautiful work.

i was right there with you in your dream. your words are beautiful and
very powerful.

thank you for sharing

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Sat 03/03/07 08:14 AM
wow--like this one---