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I slip into the realm of dreams
Where all is not as it seems Upon a purple horse I ride With a six gun at my side Annie Oakley I am not Creeping goblins covered in snot Chasing my feet as I run Towards the blackening sun Dream shifts and changes I am standing before a coffin People all around crying and grieving I want to look inside and see who it is But I am afraid A sick and twisted voice in my ear "Go on look, you will not be surprised" So I let my gaze fall upon the body inside It is me..... Needles protruding from my arms Covered in scars Blackened eyes It all comes as no surprise And the dream shifts and changes once again Standing on the edge of cliff The sea surging and pulsating below Steel gray skies Clouding my eyes Behind me he stands Waiting for me to turn away He calls my name Dream shifts and changes yet again I stand now beside a house on the plains He is there once again Standing by my side Holding my hand Whispering calming words in my ears Dispelling all of my fears Pulling me close to him Holding me tight Making it all feel so right He speaks again "Come inside doll Where its warm Let not the bad dreams take form Come with me now You know you belong" In my sleep I cry out his name Waking myself from these dreams No longer filled with screams |
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your simply the best girly!!
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Awwww g/f talking about pulling someone into your dream of dreams very
good one. |
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Wow!this is a very compelling,ceaselessly ending journey into an
expansive and vast territory.The whole concept of dream shifting and changing is incredible and opens up a whole realm of possibilities.Depending on the readers perception there are two forces or angels if you will at work here.However the frightening part of it is that I detect an equally shared balance of power between the two.Thus providing the bearer of these dreams to remain vigilant and ever cautious.This rawks!gurlgriend.Godspeed!Cybear. p.s.(phew)no six~shooters involved.(bear smiles) |
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WOW!
Very vivid and compelling... |
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EXCELLENT ... pulls the reader RIGHT into the word.... :)
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Wow! Poet...very nicely done. Very descriptive... Thank you for sharing. |
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WoW !!!
You amaze me everytime I read your words the power of you soul is incredible,, |
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It felt like I was right there with you in that dream. Very well done.
Thank you. |
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Looks to me your Soulmate is with you in your dreams. The neverending
strength they offer and shifting of times over the decades. I love this one, it is quite unique. G |
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This changing in and out is like the many skins we lose and grow new through our lives. Who are we to think that these dead tissues were without thought of there on life-leaving them!! Great trail of memories through the cells of time and souls! |
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poet.. you did it again. beautiful work.
i was right there with you in your dream. your words are beautiful and very powerful. thank you for sharing |
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wow--like this one---
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