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Topic: Designed to be a Hottie
d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Mon 06/23/08 12:15 PM
When I lay eyes on her MY NIPPLES GET HARD They tense up I can't sand it Like a beach hot pebbles burn back Turn back time Press rewind I must see her again I need to look at her To feel stronger Her beauty magnified In person She stretches her arms out In every direction Shunning down on me without any protection I'm vulnerable She makes my body blush All the parts I show her She examines All day long Drawing farther away By night MY NIPPLES SOFTEN By night She sleeps on the other side Of the planet Tapping me on the shoulder Every morning except When she smacks me Adding color to my life Burning me when I smother her With attention She is My sun

Killer666 Joined Mon 06/16/08 Posts: 1443	Mon 06/23/08 12:17 PM
Nipples

elwoodsully Joined Tue 05/01/07 Posts: 7477	Mon 06/23/08 12:18 PM
Nipples Man nipples...yuck

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Mon 06/23/08 12:19 PM
Nipples Man nipples...yuck

Killer666 Joined Mon 06/16/08 Posts: 1443	Mon 06/23/08 12:19 PM
Nipples Man nipples...yuck any nipples are yummmy

myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Mon 06/23/08 12:23 PM
I like

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Mon 06/23/08 12:24 PM
reminds me of a song...

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Mon 06/23/08 12:30 PM
oh my good write!

Unknow Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Mon 06/23/08 12:32 PM


AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 06/23/08 12:55 PM
Guys, you are so funny on the nipple thing Nice write sweet J

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Mon 06/23/08 01:36 PM
Great writing, clever as always.

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Mon 06/23/08 03:27 PM
The sun outshines Toby Keith...

DirkGently Joined Sun 06/22/08 Posts: 1252	Mon 06/23/08 06:35 PM
The sun outshines Toby Keith... a 15 watt light bulb outshines toby kieth, but i digress...good writing

calmguy3 Joined Fri 05/23/08 Posts: 393	Mon 06/23/08 07:24 PM
Whao now everytime i look at the sun i'll blush thinkin about my Nipples an all, LOL

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Mon 06/23/08 11:36 PM
When I lay eyes on her MY NIPPLES GET HARD They tense up I can't sand it Like a beach hot pebbles burn back Turn back time Press rewind I must see her again I need to look at her To feel stronger Her beauty magnified In person She stretches her arms out In every direction Shunning down on me without any protection I'm vulnerable She makes my body blush All the parts I show her She examines All day long Drawing farther away By night MY NIPPLES SOFTEN By night She sleeps on the other side Of the planet Tapping me on the shoulder Every morning except When she smacks me Adding color to my life Burning me when I smother her With attention She is My sun This one rocks d4!!

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Tue 06/24/08 04:43 AM


Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Tue 06/24/08 09:20 AM Edited by Differentkindofwench on Tue 06/24/08 09:24 AM
The sun outshines Toby Keith... a 15 watt light bulb outshines toby kieth, but i digress...good writing A tad Bently there Dirk?

Unknow Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Tue 06/24/08 09:24 AM
Well put there Wench!!! The sun outshines Toby Keith... a 15 watt light bulb outshines toby kieth, but i digress...good writing A tad Bently there Dirks?

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