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Topic: open your heart
tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Mon 06/23/08 11:43 AM
I know there are no guarantees in life, I am not asking for that. What I am asking for is for you to allow your heart to be open. You say that you can't open up your heart to me because you don't want me to get hurt. I am already fully in this, if I get hurt its because my heart is open, not yours. What are you afraid of, I think you are afraid to get hurt. I think you are afraid that this could be too good to be true. I think that under that strong exterior that you put up like a shield, you are already scared to death! I have no intentions of hurting you and you have no intentions of hurting me. We are both not going into this blindly, so open your heart and let me in. tanya 6-23-2008

awolf1010 Joined Sun 03/30/08 Posts: 7251	Mon 06/23/08 11:45 AM
I never knew?

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Mon 06/23/08 11:45 AM
This is great Tanya!

Grizzly52 Joined Thu 06/19/08 Posts: 558	Mon 06/23/08 11:47 AM
Excellent writing

elwoodsully Joined Tue 05/01/07 Posts: 7477	Mon 06/23/08 11:47 AM
Yeah, Dude, what SHE said.. Open it up!! Pretty,TA.

robert1652 Joined Wed 11/14/07 Posts: 8447	Mon 06/23/08 11:48 AM
Tanya this is splendid I wish you long lasting happiness

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Mon 06/23/08 11:49 AM
Thanks! wolfie poo d4tc Grizzly sully

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Mon 06/23/08 11:50 AM
Tanya this is splendid I wish you long lasting happiness thank you, robert!

Gypsy41 Joined Tue 05/15/07 Posts: 123359	Mon 06/23/08 11:50 AM


tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Mon 06/23/08 11:51 AM
thanks

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 06/23/08 01:27 PM
Excellent write girlfriend!

frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Mon 06/23/08 01:39 PM
nice and strong message for him I know there are no guarantees in life, I am not asking for that. What I am asking for is for you to allow your heart to be open. You say that you can't open up your heart to me because you don't want me to get hurt. I am already fully in this, if I get hurt its because my heart is open, not yours. What are you afraid of, I think you are afraid to get hurt. I think you are afraid that this could be too good to be true. I think that under that strong exterior that you put up like a shield, you are already scared to death! I have no intentions of hurting you and you have no intentions of hurting me. We are both not going into this blindly, so open your heart and let me in. tanya 6-23-2008

Unknow Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Mon 06/23/08 01:51 PM
Well done!!!

ledi180 Joined Sun 04/15/07 Posts: 5910	Mon 06/23/08 01:55 PM
So true Were ya reading my mind??

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 06/23/08 02:47 PM
"You say that you can't open up your heart to me because you don't want me to get hurt. I am already fully in this, if I get hurt its because my heart is open, not yours." Cannot get any clearer than that! Another flower, for you

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Tue 06/24/08 06:23 AM
Excellent write girlfriend! Thanks! AngelLight and thanks for the second read! I was told last night that it was like a letter to the complaint department!

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Tue 06/24/08 06:24 AM
thanks, (((frank))) mteagle ledi Thank you everyone from reading and your comments.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 06/24/08 07:59 AM
"I was told last night that it was like a letter to the complaint department! " Nawww, it's a letter from the psyche (Breath or Soul) department!

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Tue 06/24/08 08:00 AM


pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Tue 06/24/08 09:18 AM
Excellent write. We move forward through love not fear. Let the love shine through.