Topic: The Recipe to Eternity | |
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Heart of Solid Gold
Never worrying of things your told Can't help every one who throws in the cards on a fold In the end they walk away with nothing To busy fussin About nothin & Lil somthins They don't see the power in rain It's just another Grey day You'll hear them say Spendin more energy to whine Than on gaols they were meant to find Have they been afflicted by evil spells They'll never tell As negative ones gather in their mass's Down the road the ones with ball's of brasses Refusing to give up the fight For what is right Pushing forward with all their might Long into the night Walkin through life's darkness Chest held high with a steady stride Laughing at evils eye And anything with it that stings Gladly absorbing an good fortune Karma brings Many don't follow the church's bell Or sing on Sunday along side the echos of tambourines But strongly believe Jesus hand's did bleed Many believe Worshiping the man who hung from a cross made of trees Is not the only path to eternity That it can be accomplished not just through Christianity Many cultures believe They have the recipe to eternity |
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I DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Like this one!!!!!
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nice cadence ... it read like a rap in my head |
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"Many cultures believe
They have the recipe to eternity " How true how true...so many wars fought in the name of God. Nice one calmguy, nice one There is certainly more than one way of getting to a destination |
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very good write
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nice cadence ... it read like a rap in my head LMAO it's a funny thing i never saw it like that. But now that you mention it, I can see the words flowin into the room with Eminem at the microphone. |
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I DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Like this one!!!!! Much obliged my friend Much obliged |
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"Many cultures believe They have the recipe to eternity " How true how true...so many wars fought in the name of God. Nice one calmguy, nice one There is certainly more than one way of getting to a destination so many wars fought in the name of God. Jeeesh what a referee job. If only. everyone was a dreamer & John Lennon fans and decided to live in Harmony. If only thanks Sweety |
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very good write Thank for the flowers |
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"Many cultures believe They have the recipe to eternity " How true how true...so many wars fought in the name of God. Nice one calmguy, nice one There is certainly more than one way of getting to a destination so many wars fought in the name of God. Jeeesh what a referee job. If only. everyone was a dreamer & John Lennon fans and decided to live in Harmony. If only thanks Sweety You're very welcome...the write is quite thought provoking... |
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right back atcha |
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cool, I dig this poem.
jimmy |
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Very good indeed. Well thought out.
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cool, I dig this poem. jimmy |
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Very good indeed. Well thought out. Thanks Wolfeyes58 |
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