Oooh care for seconds? *grinning wickedly* (((((H))))

Oh damn you are funny!!!!

hmmmm
cute

GRRRRRRRRRRR

Come on ovah heah Mister and let me squeeze your little kissy face cheeks MUUUUAH

simmer wizzie simmer

Ok so why do you put ine word per line??

Be nice to me, I'm tired....I did a radio show tonight...*grin*

Oh yea??
Talk show?

You are great at avoiding the question..which was..what was the purpose in it...to inform us of how leary we should be of you. or to bring others down...please explain and maybe I'll understand... what was the point and who are you trying to reach..obviosly other folks who like to read about your morbid self loathing(and how you may cure it)Honesty and self exposure have a place and I think you catch more flies with honey than men with morbid poetry.. this may be your ticket to fame but mine is trying to try to make folks feel better when they read something I put my heart into.. I was trying to understand your poetry and the reasoning behind it..now you can slam me for having no pic but that fails in all ways to address your thought process behind the writing..
...you wrote...I think this is in no way negative it is an introspective view that more people should be as honest about and as willing to express...sometimes there are more to things than just the words
There is beauty in all expression for those of us with open minds. This write is a good example of one person looking inside for truth instead of relying on someone else to supply it
Not a bad way to live if you ask me (just my opinion)
now for my opinion...you say there is beauty in all expression...what a load that is...an open mind has nothing what so ever to do with it...the problem with an open mind comes when you offend others with the idea that it is your right and calling..Did you like 911...someone expressed their views...was that art or their right.If one were to kill a cat and use the blood to paint with ,would that be okay with you..a form of expression for the open mind and according to you , i should understand that and if I don't like it , go on my way and because I don't have a picture or know you ,my opinion does'nt count ...I laugh...
words are all I know of you and to be honest , you are a scary woman..who was apparently self destructive in your past...sorry but that is what I got from your poetry...

ummm - wrong thread?

i may have to get out the air bazooka that shoots
out high velocity pink stuffed plush bears on this
one...don't make me do it...

checks cupboard for pink bear supply - ample
silly string? check. cuts open a fresh case...

OMG please tell me you did not compare this write with the events at the world trade center...do you believe that was expression or an action or possibly a reaction?
I think that perhaps your example was the biggest stretch of misguided interpretation I have ever seen.
You speak of art then you try to draw a comparison between a mass murder carried out by a group of religious fundamentalist and a collection of words in a poetry forum? WOW!!!
So by this example you are stating that everyone that has ever died as a result of war, oppression, gang violence or even serial killers are victims of expression? huh too much...


(“the problem with an open mind comes when you offend others with the idea that it is your right and calling.”)...
to do what exactly?...voice ones opinion?...draw absurd references to things that have nothing in common? as I see it life is not always cartwheels and cotton candy. To say that this write was less valuable than something you would have written (as you put it... make folks feel better when they read something I put my heart into) is shallow and self serving but, that is ok. You are entitled to your opinion just as there are people who would think it is ok to slaughter cats for the sake of art. I do not agree with it however, I do understand that it is a difference of beliefs and mine do not always make me right. That sir, is the beauty of an open mind...

kc!
you should know better than to taunt blue box Wowsers on Friday the 13th!

.good morning and I am sorry I ever read this poetry forumn...just cruisin around the sight and thought I wouldn't disturb anyone and read a good poem ...what a joke this turned out to be...
the sad part of your answer is that it proves my point...you wrote:
"You are entitled to your opinion just as there are people who would think it is ok to slaughter cats for the sake of art. I do not agree with it however, I do understand that it is a difference of beliefs and mine do not always make me right. That sir, is the beauty of an open mind.."
A differance of beliefs, omG... so you have the idea that killing cats for art makes it acceptable by any stretch of the imagination..
I shun evil acts and despise those that perpitrate and condone them..The world would be a little better if there really was a moral value system,that was enforcable....I'll stand by mine and the cats of the world are safe here..
by the way there s1owhand, my blue box says alot..just about as much as the big kitty I see below but maybe less than the mask for the devil worshiper with tears of blood....who by the way seems to be drawn to the poet..like minds hang well together...I gotta go...

Country Mike,

If you bothered to look, you would see that Mz. Wiz was not looking or is not looking for a relationship on this site. Read her profile. Not all of us are trying to impress the opposite sex with all the qualities you deem important. You also assume that everything that is written is about the person doing the writing.

This is a creative writing forum...emphasis on creative. Everything that is written is freedom of expression. It is not always the truth about the author. If you are on this site for very long you will realize that this is a site for being supportive of others. People on this site offer support to those writing. There are other sites that offer criticism on writing. This is not it.



You go Alicia!!!

Well, with this one long drawn out post of yours you have convinced me that nothing you say is relevant in anyway shape or form to me, poetry, the people on this board or the world in general.

First off, who are you quoting exactly because from what I've read, you've completed quoted kc's statement to you and atributed to me. Mistake number one. Mistake number two is making a fatal slam on a piece of work you clearly have not read, dissected or comprehended.

You obviously are as thick as a bag of wet cement but I'm going to give it a shot here ok? Let me speak in real plain english. IF you had any comprehension of what that poem was about, you would have recognized that I wasn't "warning" anybody about anything. I'm writing about the tendencies we as women quite often have in making the wrong mistakes at the beginning of a relationship. About how we tend to let our insecurities get in the way of new and wonderful happenings between us (i.e. me) and a new man in her life. You clearly don't didn't garner that from anything written. On top of that you're response here regarding 911 was so off wildly off base that I smelled the scent of Jerry Falwell in the air. I can picture you watching his late night/early morning sermons with a beautific look on your face. I don't really care if you have a picture of not, you don't interest me in the least...seriously...you're judgemental, you're rude, and you clearly don't comprehend the realities that people struggle with when starting a new relationship. I also don't really care what you have to say, because you are a one dimensional man who hasn't posted anything that I can find, worth reading beyond judgements passed, and incorrect assumptions and perceptions. In short, you are meaningless in my life, and therefore, will not be addressed again. I speak to the people on this board that have something to actually say, that actually might color my view a little in a positive way. Son, that ain't nothin you is evah gonna do, so I would suggest you pack it in, and keep walking away from me. Why? Because I'm going to medieval on your butt if you keep bothering me. Now...do something productive rather than waste my time. Go find the religious thread where you can spout your condemnations and judgements till the cows come home. I'm sure the cows would be fascinated, you're clearly as interesting as they are.

Hey Um H? Could I have a plush pink bear too???????

Hey kc, I bet you never realized I was secretly a verbal terrorist did you?

I'm sorry you read this forum as well. I don't believe I've run into such a religiously zealous judgemental and narrow minded person since I've read about the Puritans from long ago.

You have taken my words, and his words so literally that they don't even reflect the original poem any longer.

As for slowhand, you're pretty lucky he's been as kind to you as he has been. But then again perhaps he's smarter than I. He knows when not to waste his time on ignorance. I always have a hope that the ignorant can see the light. In this case, I am wrong. As for tears of blood, he's a very dear friend of mine. One you have no business attacking. kc? Kc is probably one of the brightest stars on this forum, a star you will never recognize because you will never in a lifetime understand anything he is saying. As for my poetry? Well here's a suggestion boy, take a literary class and carefully go over the section dealing with "metaphors". After a year or so of studying, perhaps you might understand what I was writing about. If that doesn't work, crack open your piggy bank, march down to your local 7/11 and buy yourself a freakin' clue. In the meantime, I suggest you not read my work. It's obviously over your head.

Thank you pkd...what a great post. Unfortunately, sometimes you can take the boy out of the country, but you just can't take the country out of the boy. This is one of those cases. This is a person who is never going to understand...seriously....he likes the conflict, that's clear to see. In the realization, I'm simply not going to respond to him any longer. Its only feeding his fire, and gives him a platform to spout his nonsense.

How are you doing darling?