Topic: I Might Go To Hell For This
d4tc's photo
Wed 06/11/08 11:15 AM
Edited by d4tc on Wed 06/11/08 11:22 AM
I was at the right place at the right time
Moved to the wrong place now left behind
Now the wrong place has no rewind
The right place is trapped in my mind
Only the wrong place I am now confined
When the right place felt too confined
I looked above for a sign to define the divine
Thanking God I was not the only one left behind



























lurchs_sister's photo
Wed 06/11/08 11:28 AM
Never left behind
Always carried within
Within seen without
Behind getting ahead
Ahead becoming beside
Beside means hand in hand


Lovely wrinkles!flowerforyou

Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 06/11/08 01:57 PM
Dadburn Jason, you had my head reeling. I didn't know if I was going down a one way street or to a dead end. That was awesome though. And I don't think you will be going to hell for that.

no photo
Wed 06/11/08 01:58 PM
flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Wed 06/11/08 03:00 PM
No sweet J....you're not goin to hell laugh :smile:

Nice write flowerforyou