Topic: I Took Her Breathe Away
d4tc's photo
Tue 06/10/08 01:38 AM
When we met she said, "you take my breathe away"
She said something very similar when she wanted to leave
Only rephrased as, "i feel like you are suffocating me"


Let me tell you
About taking her breathe away
I didn't change after we met
I kept taking her breathe away
Maybe thats where I messed up
I kept suffocating her
I took her breathe away
Almost daily
Suffocating her
Taking her breathe away
Almost daily
I took her breathe away
Suffocating her
I kept suffocating her
She couldn't breathe
I took her breathe away
I didn't care
I loved her too much
I was inconsiderate
Suffocating her
I didn't care
Suffocating her
She couldn't breathe
I didn't care
I took her breathe away
By suffocating her
I never stopped
Suffocating her
She couldn't breathe
I didn't care
Almost daily
Suffocating her
By taking her breathe away
Loving her almost daily
Suffocated her

kerbear73's photo
Tue 06/10/08 01:38 AM
Better give her breath back so she can breath laugh

MirrorMirror's photo
Tue 06/10/08 01:39 AM
drinker drinker drinker drinker drinker

pkh's photo
Tue 06/10/08 05:17 AM
flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

2Btrue2One's photo
Tue 06/10/08 06:00 AM
d4, we are all guilty of doing that my friend, she should have talked to you about what you were doing.. don't be so hard on yourself.. Time will take care of everything..
Cheers my friend..drinker drinker

ArtGurl's photo
Tue 06/10/08 07:20 AM
flowerforyou

lurchs_sister's photo
Tue 06/10/08 09:50 AM
Jason this is wonderfully written and expressed!

There go your wrinkles again!flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Tue 06/10/08 01:21 PM
Intense sweet J....great play on words flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 06/10/08 04:44 PM
drinker
To some love is suffercating
and some would give their very breath for love.
Very good write!

myanimalcracker's photo
Tue 06/10/08 04:59 PM
:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: