Very nice... I used to be a soldier...

A nice story of love.. Thank you for sharing that..

great write.....i feel the same way about parfaits

You're very welcome sunshine

Always appreciated sweetheart..

very nice as always sweetie

gone, gone and gone, nice wording
restless panther-like walking,
agitation radiating with each step,
eyes flickering rapidly back at forth,
a silent phone, a blank white lit screen,
saying more loudly than a piercing scream,
you're gone, gone, gone

jumping at a sudden noise,
what am I, a war torn vet??
Rapidly gunfire voices outside my windows,
its evening and I haven't heard from you yet,
cruel insomnia creeping in, and I'm up at dawn,
but I'll never sleep now 'cause
you're gone, gone, gone

my arms aching to hold you,
these lips cold and so untouched,
my body empty and crying out for you,
my love unrequited, tossed aside blindly,
I never dreamed I'd miss you so much,
and not knowing now how I'll ever go on,
I'm an empty chalice, loveless and void,
lonely and lost cause you're gone,
gone
gone.....

and then there were none
just me





fine. like a line.

Intensely emotional

Dang GONE it! I really liked it!
((((MsWizard))))