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Topic: Land of the living
Silkbutterfli Joined Mon 07/30/07 Posts: 1008	Mon 06/09/08 12:40 PM
My heart's been broken so many times, it's a wonder it still beats. I built a wall so high around it, it seems insurpassable. Each day that passes there is a new chip or crack in that wall. I've come to realize it can only be whole again by tearing down the wall. I can only be willing to love again, by healing my heart. It will take time, but I am willing, to return to the land of the living.

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Tue 06/10/08 08:49 AM
Now that's a pretty darn good comparison. I liked the idea. Good write Teri.

Silkbutterfli Joined Mon 07/30/07 Posts: 1008	Tue 06/10/08 12:47 PM
Thanks Robert, I appreciate the comments.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 06/10/08 12:55 PM
Wow, Silk. Powerful and beautiful

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Tue 06/10/08 12:59 PM
Nice write.

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Tue 06/10/08 01:04 PM
nice write

Silkbutterfli Joined Mon 07/30/07 Posts: 1008	Tue 06/10/08 01:13 PM
Wow, Silk. Powerful and beautiful Thank you. At some point and time, you gotta get back in there and try again

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 06/10/08 01:16 PM
Wow, Silk. Powerful and beautiful Thank you. At some point and time, you gotta get back in there and try again No. None of us have to do anything. It's all about choice, and I love the choice you're making

Silkbutterfli Joined Mon 07/30/07 Posts: 1008	Tue 06/10/08 01:34 PM
I am working on it. Moving this weekend to a place that will hopefully be better for me and my daughter. Met someone here that may have potential (we shall see). Time will tell.

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Tue 06/10/08 04:46 PM

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