ok, the person who I wrote the poem for says that it is a horney poem; I say its artisic expression?

what do you all think?

http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/129474

Wow, that's nice writing...

I'd say that's an artistic expression of your horniness.

Nice write!!

Depends on the reader's frame of mind, I think.

very nice. I wouldn't say it's horney but it is very sensual. Very tastefully done.

It's artistic, and poetic.

thank you all for your comments!


nana nana boo boo to 'you know who you are'

Artistic no doubt, here is horny

A tender fawn of temptation
dreams of unrivaled ecstacy
a physically sensual libation
this feminine mystique delicacy

My body is writhing with desire
I so want to caress your deep within
my loins are burning with a fire
I'm craving to impregnate you with sin

I long to lock my lips upon your naked breast
to taste of your nectar, to suckle and sip
to feel the firmness of your pert round nipples pressed
to drink your mother love from their tip

I wish to kiss your lips with a pearlescent dew
to moisten and to delve into realms of bliss
to explore this virgin path and speak in ways anew
in an intertwining glory of a kiss

to speckle you with love pecks all across your face
to nibble on your ear, then kiss softly below
to caress the rivulets of hair, shimmering like lace
until you beg of me my seed to sow

to kiss the sacred lines of your graceful neck
to caress it and massage it gently with my lips
to be infolded in your beauty and your grace as of a swan
to feel your breath as a coverlet, as a garment I have donned

and then to drive my tongue down across your ribs and waist
and of your salty juices I will in my palate taste
then to delve to that musky spot, that place that is so chaste
to drink of your flow, and help you to know
that none will go to waste

then to watch you squirm, and to feel you writhe
and to see you tremor, in your body lithe

as you beg of me to unite now
as I rise up and into you plow
as our bodies so wet do finally unite
you do feel so perfect, so sopping and tight

you squeeze out of me my manly desire
taking me higher, and higher, and higher
into realms of bliss unknown to man

IT'S ONLY A POEM, I'M STILL USING MY HAND

well, where is the sweating need a cold shower emoticon?

did you just like whip that out?? (no pun intended)

geez, now I'll never get to sleep

i couldn't even read the whole thing!

It's in Love poems on my website, didn't get that far eh? It's called "Fawn"

I cut and pasted it over to my email!!

I think I have finally embarrased myself I can't believe I shared that.

um whew no but definitely bookmarking that one

embarassed? it's breaktakingly beautiful
(well except for the last line maybe)

When I wrote that I thought, you know, making love is one of the most beautiful things in the world, I should write a poem about it, so I did, but it is intense, but it is intense! So there!

its very good! yantraimages

uh, intense, yep, that it is

I had to go for the comic relief at the end, it was too intense. Take 'em to the top, and drop 'em like a rock.

typical...