Topic: one of my favs i wrote a while ago | |
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The Angel of His Dreams 1-May-05
With out her he's nothing she is his everything she is the Angel of his dream they'll make the perfect team if he could only win the fight and ask her out tonight but if she turns him down he'll forever wear a frown so he gains the disire and ask her anyways will you go out with me one of the next days she said no but before she told him why he walked away and started to cry she was busy that weekend but always has liked him more then a friend so it broke her heart seeing him fall apart she thought she had lost her chance but a little later the met at a dance right when he walked in thourgh the door she led him out to the floor they danced and talked the night away in each other arms is how they want to stay |
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YOU ARE VERRY GOOD
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Very Well Done
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Good write!
Welcome to the poetry section and JSH!(OPY) |
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Good read and welcome to your new home,lol
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thanks for the comments
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