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“Looking Around” I sat and watch each day. As love comes and goes their way. Some seem to live in the past. Thinking this one is the last. Others keep looking ahead. While some sit back and dread. No longer do they want to look. Wondering is there a book? On how to make things work. Before love makes me go berserk. One never knows. How love goes. We are lost without it. But we will never admit. That no matter what we still want. What seems to haunt. Why must we chase. Love before we can embrace. At times it makes us cry. And other times leave us asking why. But then we all know in life. Love is part of the strife. We all must go through. If it is love we want to pursue. But things don’t always go our way. And we are left in dismay. Don’t stand and proclaim. The other is all to blame. You see when the time is right. Love will ignite. K.L.M 6/7/2008 |
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Excellent:
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Txy this is lovely. The last stanza in particular is haunting...
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Fire, pure FIRE.
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So true Kristi, excellent write!!
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Good one girl! Good one! (((Kristi)))
(shoot- put the rope away) |
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So true Kristi, excellent write!! I second that notion |
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Thank you all for your kind words I do appreciate it very much glad that all could relate to it.
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that's a beauty of life-ups and downs, kristi
“Looking Around” I sat and watch each day. As love comes and goes their way. Some seem to live in the past. Thinking this one is the last. Others keep looking ahead. While some sit back and dread. No longer do they want to look. Wondering is there a book? On how to make things work. Before love makes me go berserk. One never knows. How love goes. We are lost without it. But we will never admit. That no matter what we still want. What seems to haunt. Why must we chase. Love before we can embrace. At times it makes us cry. And other times leave us asking why. But then we all know in life. Love is part of the strife. We all must go through. If it is love we want to pursue. But things don’t always go our way. And we are left in dismay. Don’t stand and proclaim. The other is all to blame. You see when the time is right. Love will ignite. K.L.M 6/7/2008 |
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I believe that in one way or another, Love is always before us....I think the question is do we accept the form it has come in...Ty for your write
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A very beautiful poem kristi, and so very true for a lot of people..
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I believe that in one way or another, Love is always before us....I think the question is do we accept the form it has come in...Ty for your write Awww so very true indeed. Frank your right life does has it's ups and downs we learn to deal with them and move on. Daniel thank you for reading. |
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A very living poem to grasp all of us into knowing
some of what most of us have been through. To come to know this as a realility, here on this net. Nice poem Kristy and good to read you here as always..Keep smilling.. |
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Not only a reality on the net but as well in real life also.
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TRUE!!! SIMPLE AND BEAUTIFUL TX!!!
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TRUE!!! SIMPLE AND BEAUTIFUL TX!!! Thank you very much mteagle |
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