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Topic: Whither or Whether
Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sat 06/07/08 07:50 AM
Whither or Whether Whither thou goest My heart will always be, Whether separated Or when she is with me. Whither thou thinketh My thoughts will be there too, Whether her mind Thinks of the beautiful deep blue. Whither thou looketh Upon the wide open plains, Whether she seeketh Of what our hearts gain. Whither thou leaveth She will always remain in my heart, Whether she stays A piece of me will impart.

Rapunzel Joined Tue 08/22/06 Posts: 16246	Sat 06/07/08 07:55 AM


Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sat 06/07/08 08:06 AM
WOW, what a surprise Vanessa, I so appreciate all those yellow roses. Good to see you.

Redsoxfan1 Joined Sat 12/29/07 Posts: 8388	Sat 06/07/08 08:07 AM
Very nice write!! I like that!!

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sat 06/07/08 08:18 AM
Very nice write!! I like that!! Thanks Erica...glad you liked it.

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Sat 06/07/08 08:21 AM
wonderful as always, I think she will be a lucky lady to get your heart and with you she will always stay.

Rapunzel Joined Tue 08/22/06 Posts: 16246	Sat 06/07/08 08:26 AM
WOW, what a surprise Vanessa, I so appreciate all those yellow roses. Good to see you. Soo good to see you also , Robert... hope all is well with you & God Bless You abundantly

Rapunzel Joined Tue 08/22/06 Posts: 16246	Sat 06/07/08 08:28 AM Edited by Rapunzel on Sat 06/07/08 08:31 AM
wonderful as always, I think she will be a lucky lady to get your heart and with you she will always stay. Hi Pam... my East Coast Sister... yes, whoever manages to win her way into Robert's heart will definitely be a very very fortunate lady and i hope to God she always appreciates him....

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sat 06/07/08 08:30 AM
wonderful as always, I think she will be a lucky lady to get your heart and with you she will always stay. Hi Pam... my East Coast Sister... yes, whoever manages to win her way into Robert's heart will definitely be a very very fortunate lady and i hope to God she appreciates him.... Thanks Vanessa, you just inspired me to write another one...just that easy. Will be posting later.

Rapunzel Joined Tue 08/22/06 Posts: 16246	Sat 06/07/08 08:34 AM Edited by Rapunzel on Sat 06/07/08 09:00 AM
wonderful as always, I think she will be a lucky lady to get your heart and with you she will always stay. Hi Pam... my East Coast Sister... yes, whoever manages to win her way into Robert's heart will definitely be a very very fortunate lady and i hope to God she appreciates him.... Thanks Vanessa, you just inspired me to write another one...just that easy. Will be posting later. all right !!! how sweet !!! You are so creative and talented.... {{{{{{ <<<<<< Robert >>>>>> }}}}}}

Rapunzel Joined Tue 08/22/06 Posts: 16246	Sat 06/07/08 08:35 AM Edited by Rapunzel on Sat 06/07/08 08:36 AM
Hello to Red sox fan , too... {{{ <<< Erica >>>}}}

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Sat 06/07/08 08:35 AM
Hello to Red sox fan , too... {{{ <<< Erica >>>}}} hello to you sweet lady

Rapunzel Joined Tue 08/22/06 Posts: 16246	Sat 06/07/08 08:37 AM
Muah to everyone...

Dragoness Joined Wed 10/17/07 Posts: 23320	Sat 06/07/08 08:38 AM
Very quaint, Robert

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 06/07/08 08:45 AM
Kool Very different...

Gryphyn Joined Sat 10/28/06 Posts: 3031	Sat 06/07/08 08:53 AM
I always enjoy what you put to words, even though I don't always post its a pleasure to see words of the past and present. G

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Sat 06/07/08 09:09 AM
((((Robert)))) Beautiful write as allways! Made me think of the movie "Fried green tomatoes"! Of friendship and of love.

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sat 06/07/08 06:53 PM
Thank you all for your wonderful comments... Muahh back at you Vanessa.. Thank you Barb and Angel...yes, something a little different for once. Gryph..hope you and Kim the best of happiness. Susan...always good to see your comment. Loved the movie.