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Topic: Th Twist
michael1313's photo
Mon 02/19/07 11:38 AM


To see a twist of many smiles,
or twisting road of many miles,
carving through mountains,
or twisting through dreams,
splashing in fountains,
or swimming through streams,
to see a loving smile,
dancing in my dreams,
walk that loney mile,
to see what loving means,

To make the smile really twist,
special gifts,she can't resist,
walk the winding trailing twist,
make the mile to waterfalls mist,
make the smile she can't resist,
take her to the pool of mist,

the Cache is there,my tent intact,
gifts of dreams within this pact,
twisting smoke,of last nights act,
dancing fire of passions pact,
welcome to my camp,in fact,
welcome to my dreams,
of passions act,

twisting smoke,dancing in the air,
resembles your body,and swishing hair,
as if you were twisting,dancing there,
a single flame,soon arose to the air,
sparking up hope,and passionate care,
twisting of smoke,dancing in the air,
twisting like rope,going nowhere,
twisting the smile of your face so fair,
misting the eyes of the smile you wear...
Lonely Soulsmokin

LAMom's photo
Mon 02/19/07 12:04 PM
Michael,
Your Dreams so real so vivid
Incredible My Friend flowerforyou

krowraven7's photo
Mon 02/19/07 12:14 PM
hey thats a really cool poem!!!

sandylou2456's photo
Mon 02/19/07 12:25 PM


wow Michael What a beautiful Dreamer you are.

sandylou2456's photo
Mon 02/19/07 12:26 PM


And might I might add...The one you choose to share those *dreams* will
be very fortunte and blessed.

sandylou2456's photo
Mon 02/19/07 12:26 PM


And might I might add...The one you choose to share those *dreams* will
be very fortunte and blessed.

sandylou2456's photo
Mon 02/19/07 12:26 PM


And might I might add...The one you choose to share those *dreams* will
be very fortunte and blessed.

shenadra's photo
Mon 02/19/07 12:30 PM
Another great poem. Where are you getting your inspiration from? Where
ever it is coming from, keep up the good work. flowerforyou
flowerforyou drinker drinker

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 02/19/07 12:31 PM
Good one M. flowerforyou

creationsfire's photo
Mon 02/19/07 12:53 PM
Very sweet M........veryflowerforyou

karmafury's photo
Mon 02/19/07 12:55 PM
Really good piece Mike.

no photo
Mon 02/19/07 12:58 PM
And you know i love it you do have a way of expressing your self in the
best kind of way flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

michael1313's photo
Mon 02/19/07 12:59 PM
Thank You all for readingsmokin

where do I get my inspirations from?

my inspirations come from beauty within,
my inspirations come from beauty without,
it comes from friends all about...


but mostly it comes from being without a beauty:wink:

Morena350's photo
Mon 02/19/07 01:01 PM
really good michael!!

michael1313's photo
Mon 02/19/07 01:25 PM
Thank Yousmokin

Cybear's photo
Mon 02/19/07 01:57 PM
Incredibly passionate and provoking Michael.Fantastic
poem.Godspeed!Cybear:smile: :tongue: glasses

p.s.I'm booking reservations to this campsite immediately.:tongue:

michael1313's photo
Mon 02/19/07 02:31 PM
Lmaolaugh

Ok,Bear,but you gotta stay out of my picnic basket this time!

go catch us some fish for the grill huh?:wink:

michael1313's photo
Mon 02/19/07 10:58 PM
and if it sounds busy in my tent,don't peek in:wink:

venusrose's photo
Tue 02/20/07 11:08 AM
Aw, I really like this dream...cool poem.

michael1313's photo
Tue 02/20/07 11:12 AM
Thank Youflowerforyou

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