Topic: Questions?
sweetcountrygirl's photo
Mon 02/19/07 08:55 AM
Here I am making friends
A woman, not alone, among the best
You guys here at Just Say Hi
are awesome in your jests
And keep me intrigued with your requests...

Some good hearted and sweet
others just plain mean
What I'm lookin for is someone true
that wont make me blue
A man that completes
and gives the most
when it's his least

A compliment given when its due
A kiss on the cheek in the morning dew
A hot bath drawn in a candles hue
Time alone with just YOU...

When flashes of anger spark from my eye
You have the words to calm my ire
Make it better, not worse
Turn the negative into a positive
not allowing the sparks to fly

You are familiar with the demons that chase
and have the power to demolish and abolish
and send them away in haste...

You soothe the lines from my face
when deep in worry and grumbling
my brows wrinkle and furrow
This power you have over me
is scary and welcoming
and I want to hurry

I want you to stay
I want you to go
I want to hold you
I want to be bold
(alone, its so cold)
but can I trust
Will you be here on the 'morrow
or on the first bus?


flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

michael1313's photo
Mon 02/19/07 09:08 AM
this is a wonderful poemflowerforyou :heart:

I would welcome you under my tree,anytime:wink:

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Mon 02/19/07 09:10 AM
Thanks Michael, goin to rest under there awhile and ponder...:wink:
flowerforyou

michael1313's photo
Mon 02/19/07 09:16 AM
COOL!!!

there is a nice shadey spot,
with alot of grasses and moss to sit on...
a nice quiet stream near by,pouring into a small lake...

apples to eat while you are there too:wink:

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 02/19/07 09:29 AM
Awww what a good poem that is girl and what we all
would love to have I'm sure he will come your way
and make all your days be filled with sunshine. flowerforyou

Morena350's photo
Mon 02/19/07 09:40 AM
yes, SCG man are just shy cuz your a great woman!!!
but yours will come your way like Txs. said...

karmafury's photo
Mon 02/19/07 12:29 PM
A beautifully written piece SCG.