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At one time I was the rug you laid on..the
chair you sat the bed you rested... now I am a house plant.. watching the air and the bugs why.. the why of why |
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That is very sad,good though
 things will get better with time |
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good poem...
sometimes I feel like a mushroom 
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i like that so what do u do if u feel like a shadow in sum1s life
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Very good Krowrwaven. I know what you mean.
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I have had these exact feelings. You really have a gift!
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poemA-depression
The white is all I see but words flood my eyes when I want to see all the more- maybe the alligator can sum up my teeth thoughts in a bucket for your hand to pick up and dump ..It is the sinking of things that puts me in a chair the in-activity the vacuum the invisible -ness thru a crowd a desert a crow sits wondering how it became a crow I too wonder.. how I am all I am and nothing too |
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Dam...another good one,
you have a great style to your art,your poems  keep up the good work Newbee...Sir Raven Nice work
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THATS SOME GOOD WORK !
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Really nice work Krow --
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thank you all...
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Very good pieces. Keep them coming.
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