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Dancing in the wild fire
Hair dancing round fallig to my shoulders Wind circling round Flames burning higher Reaching seemingly to the skies Tears upon my face 'cause love's finally found Feet tapping a rythm upon the ground Finding my way to You Through the silent sound of your heart beating calling only me Now we're bound Fate has made it clear Drums beating in our chest No words are spoken as you take me in your arms Written in hopes of finding One True Love 2-18-2007 SCG |
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*claps*
nice job,SCG |
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thank yu silly...
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Bravo to YOU SWEET,,,
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Very, very nice SCG. You'll find that one true love.
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SCG...very upbeat, nice flow.
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As the silvery moonlight illuminates the skyline,SCG joyously dances
around the fire.Embers fly up wards as if fireflies.Her long luxuriant hair softly lit by the fire.Then she slowly turns to see a Bear starring at her.Her hair stands completely straight up as if electric.Then as she begins to chant something about;"Jesus and all his Apostles"Cybear hands her the bag of marshmallows that he swiped.See we can co~exist harmoniously,we just need to watch out for the FIRE!Look at it gurl;it's enormous(lmao).I could get T.Hanks rescued of an island with that bad~boy fire you have going.(lmao)I love this Poem very much.(((bear~hug)))Put me down!you over sized fur bearing animal!And you're not getting any marshmallows either for being a wise bear. |
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Oh CyBear....Thank You for your wonderful comments...and I'd share
marshmallows with you anytime!... Here's a {{{H U G}}} for a fantastical bear... Iam, thanks for watching and reading, and always being there with a helping hand...(((HUG for you and D.))) Karma, A dear friend always with a kind word... Venusrose, thank you also... |
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That was a beautiful poem. I wish I was that creative...^^
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cool, scg--
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very nice
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my eyes awaits your loving dance,
swish of hair in your prance, your soul needs a loving chance, the firelight feeds your romance, Dare to dream,dare to dance, around this fire,of your romance... I really like this poem SCG you must be tired after all that dancing, here,have a seat under my tree,rest a bit |
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Awwww another good one girl very nice.
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