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I found the old picture –
The one that was lost, With the trees and the clouds And you standing next to the car Looking like magic, Your eyes on the camera Seeing through years A future but nobody home I tell myself “This never happened” -- An illusion? A fraud? A memory broken in half But here is the proof Of whatever it was, This square full of colors, Of shapes, of a dream Of a day when the words (Maybe halting at first), Interspersed with the Promise of Time – When it starts, you don’t think About how it will end – You just think about Holding onto the day The picture won’t change But the rest of the world Moves on; as you’ve done – So should I, my friends say But it isn’t that easy, The ghost is like glue – Clinging, reluctant to leave. And I will not push it away |
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Painfully haunting...great words Lex..nice to see you post here
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Very good one Lex and heartfelt you should post more.
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i agree with cccp wow keep writing
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THATS A KEEPER THERE lEX...
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Keep writing,,, Very Heartfelt
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CCP, Txs, Missingyou and Iam -- Thank you so much!
Frankly, the whole poetry format baffles me a little. I've been writing short stories (and one novel) for years, and I've gotten very comfortable with that kind of writing, but poetry is a whole different kettle of wax. I don't have the natural "feel" for it that CCP and a lot of others have, at least not yet anyway. But I'm working on it. The positive feedback is greatly appreciated. And Iam, I wanted to say congratulations to you and LAMom! You were one of the very first to welcome me, so many months (2?) ago, when I signed up, and I have always been impressed by your positivity and helpfulness to all the new people who show up here.... |
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