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Whats your point of view
When i ask you About the not so well to do The ones who's home is in an alley Criss Crossing from the Suburbs to the City Hidden in plain view On occasion a not so well to do is seen by me and you In dusty old shoes Old souls Walking in dirty old clothes I wonder if they Gave up caring About the people staring At what their wearing A few you can find With a dog trailing behind Others you can find Sleeping with their wine I ponder on the memories they leave behind Right up to the present time Were they dull or did they shine Were they evil or kind How many of you fear The idea of becoming one of them kind Or do you force yourself to be blind The few times You see the not so well to do kind |
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Hey thanks for lookin over my stuff.
I'm new to writing or should i say i don't do it as often as i'd like. It sort of comes and goes and when inspiration does strike me i find myself writing then scratching part of what i wrote only to find myself doing it again further down the page. Some people here have a way of putting words to paper as smooth as a brush puts paint to canvas. |
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Excellent write
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Thanks AngelLight
By the way I like your Tattoo "Sweet" |
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Whats your point of view When i ask you About the not so well to do The ones who's home is in an alley Criss Crossing from the Suburbs to the City Hidden in plain view On occasion a not so well to do is seen by me and you In dusty old shoes Old souls Walking in dirty old clothes I wonder if they Gave up caring About the people staring At what their wearing A few you can find With a dog trailing behind Others you can find Sleeping with their wine I ponder on the memories they leave behind Right up to the present time Were they dull or did they shine Were they evil or kind How many of you fear The idea of becoming one of them kind Or do you force yourself to be blind The few times You see the not so well to do kind |
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Thanks LAMom.
This one kinda shocked me I never noticed how much i noticed the Not So Well To Do until i wrote this piece for me and you |
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that's for all your poems I read today. Liked it.
peace jimmy |
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Thanks Jimmy
Right back atcha |
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wonderful write
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Thank you pkh
your approvals are very reassuring |
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