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Topic: My heart hurts so much
rodfcutler Joined Sun 10/21/07 Posts: 1645	Tue 05/27/08 07:55 PM
My heart hurts so much there's little hope, and from lifes deadly blows I can hardly now cope. The blood is running freely and drowning my soul, it must flee this house before life takes its toll. I actually feel the pain of being without a love the memories come crashing in like the sky falling from above. Life can be cruel and life can be kind, oh how I wish I could stop falling behind.

SKPCG Joined Mon 03/03/08 Posts: 14708	Tue 05/27/08 07:56 PM
Bravisimo, wordsmith!!

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Tue 05/27/08 07:57 PM


openheart45 Joined Sat 03/31/07 Posts: 724	Tue 05/27/08 07:57 PM
great writing...i can relate

Enya Joined Mon 11/26/07 Posts: 2077	Tue 05/27/08 07:58 PM
OMG! SOMEONE CALL 911............ ITS A

rea7456 Joined Sat 01/20/07 Posts: 135	Tue 05/27/08 07:58 PM


CherrySparks212 Joined Mon 04/07/08 Posts: 964	Tue 05/27/08 07:58 PM
THAT WAS FOR ME WASNT IT?

Dragoness Joined Wed 10/17/07 Posts: 23320	Tue 05/27/08 07:59 PM


lifestooshort6 Joined Mon 12/31/07 Posts: 6667	Tue 05/27/08 07:59 PM
very touching may I use that tomorrow in English class, poetry day

rodfcutler Joined Sun 10/21/07 Posts: 1645	Tue 05/27/08 08:01 PM
I just now composed that,but since it isnt published then I wil be honored if you do use it. Thanks!

rodfcutler Joined Sun 10/21/07 Posts: 1645	Tue 05/27/08 08:02 PM
Thankyou sweets! Appreciate your support as always!

SimplyElla Joined Wed 02/13/08 Posts: 7124	Tue 05/27/08 08:04 PM


lifestooshort6 Joined Mon 12/31/07 Posts: 6667	Tue 05/27/08 08:13 PM Edited by lifestooshort6 on Tue 05/27/08 08:13 PM
I just now composed that,but since it isnt published then I wil be honored if you do use it. Thanks! thank you very much!

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