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Topic: Giving in
michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Tue 02/13/07 11:56 AM
give into the art to know of dreams, give into your heart to know what it means, let it all go to fly in the sky, release from your past as you fly by, let go of the path of forgotten wrath, as you fly along your dreaming path, just relax by a fire,a book,or hot bath, remove all your tensions,and problems of stress, forgetting troubles,forgetting the mess, get into the bubbles of hot soaky bliss, give into giggles of a hot fantasy kiss, give into the dreams of a passionate flight, begin those dreams of your fantasies delite, give into those dreams of another sleepless Knight... Lonely Soul

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Tue 02/13/07 11:58 AM
Hummm I sense from your words maybe ya not as lonely as you once was nice read M the words are flowing very smoothly.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 02/13/07 11:59 AM
Hmmmmmmm Wise Perception Txs... Good Read Michael!!!!

michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Tue 02/13/07 12:04 PM
almost caught me with my pants down... I was getting ready for a hot soaky bubble bath nothing relaxes me more than that, on a cold winter day

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Tue 02/13/07 12:07 PM
YA WANNA BET HAVING SOMEONE TO SHARE IT IS BETTER hehehehehe

michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Tue 02/13/07 12:10 PM
dam...need a bigger tub

marilyn Joined Sat 01/20/07 Posts: 789	Tue 02/13/07 12:55 PM
Damn Michael just reading that one relaxed me sure sounds nice ( i wanna tub ) you do wonders to a persons mind

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Tue 02/13/07 01:03 PM
HERES to hot bubble baths and BUBBLES FROM WAY DOWN DEEP!!!!!! Great visual here, for 'D' and me, lol..

whispertoascream Joined Fri 11/17/06 Posts: 22844	Tue 02/13/07 01:06 PM
mmm That sounds like a wonderful idea Micheal. And I agree with tx. Are we feeling a little less lonely?

Cybear Joined Sun 11/19/06 Posts: 899	Tue 02/13/07 01:14 PM
Heck yeah!I love the sound of this already.I think I'll opt.out of my gen.shower this eve.and go for a nice long relaxing soak.A nice lilac candle on the end of the tub.Toss in a nice relaxing CD.Lay back close my eyes and just chill.Sounds excellent Michael.I will miss all the fun though me and my X used to have in the tub.I love the rubbing and tickling with toes.That was awesome.Oh!well.Life goes on as they would say.(lol)Godspeed!Cybear.

michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Tue 02/13/07 02:13 PM
just knowing that my friends are never far away is helping! thanx y'all for reading

michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Tue 02/13/07 05:27 PM
Marilyn... wait till you see what I can do to th' rest of you

michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Tue 02/13/07 05:27 PM


marilyn Joined Sat 01/20/07 Posts: 789	Tue 02/13/07 05:35 PM
oooh is that right Michael we'll have to see about that

michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Tue 02/13/07 05:39 PM
May be Vegas?

marilyn Joined Sat 01/20/07 Posts: 789	Tue 02/13/07 05:49 PM
Maybe

michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Tue 02/13/07 05:55 PM
what goes on in Vegas... Stays in Vegas

marilyn Joined Sat 01/20/07 Posts: 789	Tue 02/13/07 06:03 PM
Yup that is what the moto is

michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Tue 02/13/07 06:08 PM


michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Tue 02/13/07 06:09 PM
bet there are some really nice hot tubs there?