Topic: Gray Wolf
karmafury's photo
Mon 02/12/07 04:37 PM
Moving silently through stunted pine
I slowly descend to the lowlands
My ears twitch to every sound
I seek each scent from the wind
I see the prey that I would hunt
Yet for now they need not fear
For what I seek shall not be here
I know that I must go and wait
For one who comes from rocky waste
My padded feet take me along
Trails known since I was a cub
I climb a rock and lay to wait
My bones and scars ache
After this is complete I shall go
To the Dreamland and become a cub
To jump for the sun and run with wind
A scent, a sound, she comes
I smell the blood, the fear and fatigue
I see the two legs paws bleeding
Her pelts are torn and she tires
Rise, stretch and feel the aches anew
I descend to the trail she must take
Does she speak the lanuage of the people
Will she be as a cub I must teach
I sway my tail and move along ahead
Will she follow or will she fall
If she falls I must wait for another
I lead her to a hidden spring
Drink my fill then lay as she drinks
The bundle she carries speaks to me
Tells me that she is the one
The killing stick tells me this too
She has seen me and knows no fear
She looks up to the place I have left
She looks to where the sun rises
The time has come for me
Dreamland waits for me
I raise my head and she looks
I speak the language of the people
I say what I must
"Go on my friend
Your journey is almost at its end
When the moon splits the sky
And blood pours from your eye
You will see a brother from the north
He will teach you the art of war
Then you must prepare for the twins"
Rise one last time, I am weary
Climb a rock and howl one last time
Let all know that a Gray Wolf leaves
Let Dreamland know that I come




The quote of the wolf is directly taken from 'Journey Across The Desert'
by ChubbyCherubPoet with her permission.
My thanks to her for allowing me to write a companion piece for her
poem.

no photo
Mon 02/12/07 04:44 PM
Simply amazing and it still brings a tear to my eye...thank you Karma
for writing this piece and for knowing who the Gray Wolf is

ToyotaGirl's photo
Mon 02/12/07 04:48 PM
Wow! Karma, simple awesome. Nice work.

lionsbrew's photo
Mon 02/12/07 04:49 PM
nice. it really puts you right there.good poem.

LAMom's photo
Mon 02/12/07 04:52 PM
Wow!!! really nice work Karma

michael1313's photo
Mon 02/12/07 05:16 PM
Good work Karmasmokin

Gryphyn's photo
Mon 02/12/07 05:21 PM
Like several other poems here lately, each time I read this I feel even
more. Karma excellent add to Poet's journey, the trip to the peaks is
long and the path is as narrow as the great divide.

bigsmile

G

karmafury's photo
Mon 02/12/07 06:40 PM
Thank you all.

Poet a special thank you for your permissions.

no photo
Mon 02/12/07 07:00 PM
Karma, Your words always read with your wild and free spirit and that is
so cool...and its a great add-on to miss Poet!!
drinker Bravo dude!!!:heart:

DANE1973's photo
Mon 02/12/07 07:11 PM
Karma that was awesome bud! I loved it.The man from the north comes to
teach you the art of war.Wasn't me was it?laugh

no photo
Mon 02/12/07 07:23 PM
Ahh Dane the brother from th north is to teach Walks With Wind the art
of war and i cannot tell you who it is yet..other than he has hair of
redbigsmile

DANE1973's photo
Mon 02/12/07 07:40 PM
Damn!I have no hair.Except the ones on my chin they're red.

no photo
Mon 02/12/07 08:31 PM
heh yeah yeah so you know lol

DANE1973's photo
Mon 02/12/07 08:37 PM
Yeah but they were both awesome.Thank you (((hugs)))

catchme_ifucan's photo
Mon 02/12/07 08:42 PM
Safe Journeys, My Friends Awsome work
^j^

venusrose's photo
Tue 02/13/07 08:14 AM
Karma, Excellent companion piece!!