Topic: I Am Women
whispertoascream's photo
Sun 02/11/07 10:21 PM
I am women
I am human just like you
So why do you hurt me like you do?
We have feelings just the same
We are sick of playing your game
Do you not see the hurt in my eyes?
Do you even care when I cry?
We are equal me and you
I do not understand why you do the things you do.
All I want is to be loved
For our relationship to fit like a glove
But pain and heartache is all I feel
Why does your hate have to be so real?
You say you love me till the end
But our vows you did bend

But I am strong and no more will I take
My heart will no longer be at steak
I need to live my life
I should not have to feel these tears that I cry
So good bye to you is what I say
Tomorrow will be a better day
Because with you I can no longer stay
My wounds will heal, I will get along
For now it is time for me to sing a new song
So now it is time for me to say so long
For I am women and I am STRONG

LAMom's photo
Sun 02/11/07 10:23 PM
Whisper,,,
You are woman and so very strong,,,
very nicely put,,,, luv ya girl flowerforyou

whispertoascream's photo
Sun 02/11/07 10:28 PM
Thank you mom. Luv ya too gurl. flowerforyou

mamaDawn's photo
Sun 02/11/07 11:37 PM
You go girl; very well said you are a woman and it sounds like a very
strong one to, Hope you get everything out of life that you deserve.
have a great day.happy Dawn

whispertoascream's photo
Sun 02/11/07 11:57 PM
Thank you very much Dawn. flowerforyou

Morena350's photo
Mon 02/12/07 12:10 AM
wisper!!! that is really nice girl!!

whispertoascream's photo
Mon 02/12/07 12:27 AM
Thank you Morena.

venusrose's photo
Mon 02/12/07 09:39 AM
Good one Whisper! Strength comes from our struggles in life.

michael1313's photo
Mon 02/12/07 10:03 AM
Good poem whisper...

you are woman,hear you roar...

I am man,listen for the squeeksmokin

whispertoascream's photo
Mon 02/12/07 02:00 PM
Thank you guys.

no photo
Wed 02/14/07 09:25 PM
I missed this one the other day ,and i think it is one of your best you
sound very confident and that is great,so is the poem
happy valentines dayflowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 02/15/07 04:48 AM
Very good one keep them coming girl.

msmiko's photo
Thu 02/15/07 08:20 AM
YES YES YES I FEEL EVERY WORD SAY IT THANKS I NEEDED THAT.

msmiko's photo
Fri 02/16/07 09:16 AM
I HAD TO READ IT AGAIN TODAY TO GET MY DAY GOING THANKS SO MUCH FOR
THOSE WORD