Topic: Lions Pride
Gryphyn's photo
Sun 02/11/07 04:18 PM


Long ago, a far away place,
Animals stirred, within a small place.
Males did growl, all who could hear,
Biting, growling, intentions and fear.

Snapping a way, each others mane,
Grabbing a paw, they did refrain.
Two would battle, death do they part,
Fiercely engaged, battle did start.

Fur flying, throughout the den,
Wishing, stopping, wondering when.
Blood drippng, each others hide,
Fighting fiercly, one will have died.

Blood now dripping, one who was small,
Dripping within, true was his maul.
Went for the throat, others stood by,
Ripped it in two, Blood it did fly.

Small his size, lions did roar,
Blood dripping wet, fell to the floor.
Two lions met, alone on the thatch,
As one died, Lions were matched.

Pride was his, to protect, to explore,
Finding places, guidance and more.
Seeking mates, standing beside,
Friendship made, love is a guide.

These two lions, two can relate,
Passions flying, seeking a mate.
Prides formed, from high above,
Guided by wisdom, guided by love.

Telling this story, a lions pride,
Wondering myself, is guidance inside.
Wisdom found, high up above,
Words of life, filled with my love.

Ponder simply, two living things,
Searching life, one who can sing.
Once found, souls side by side,
Together forever, love will not hide.

Knowing now, stories been told,
Together denned, pride of gold.
Finding dens, warm in the night.
Smiles roaring, forever the light.

michael1313's photo
Sun 02/11/07 04:21 PM
that was COOL!!!

good writing Gryphyn!smokin

LAMom's photo
Sun 02/11/07 04:23 PM
Gry,,
I sat from a distance and watched
a truely incredible visual..

ToyotaGirl's photo
Sun 02/11/07 04:27 PM
Babe you are such an awesome writer. You paint a picture with words for
all to see. What a visual.

michael1313's photo
Sun 02/11/07 05:46 PM
one can almost smell the blood of the fight!!!smokin

creationsfire's photo
Sun 02/11/07 07:00 PM
I think of all the things I've read of yours, this is the best so far!

Smiles,

Karen

Gryphyn's photo
Sun 02/11/07 08:50 PM
Thank you for the kind words. They are what keep me writing.

blushing

G

karmafury's photo
Sun 02/11/07 08:53 PM
Fantastic Gryphyn. A truly great read. Thank you.

iceprincess's photo
Sun 02/11/07 10:42 PM
Ok the one that didn't make it can we name him Don prehaps.LMAO that was
really good gryph. I enjoyed the read

whispertoascream's photo
Sun 02/11/07 10:51 PM
You painted a picture so well I could almost see the fight.

Thank you for sharing.:smile: