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Topic: Raining Daggers
d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Tue 05/20/08 10:59 AM
Raining daggers On our parade Dodging all the Fallen blades Crack a smirk Toss a wink Do not care What they think Over dressed Rendezvous Studdering tryst Sky like blue Feeling fresh Irish Spring Daggers fall From this screen So obscene Nonchalant Fresh and clean Dirty thoughts Saved by grace Lost in sin Staggering tryst Piercing skin Sky was blue Over dressed Grey apparel Ambiguous mess Raining daggers Dodging blades Tree leaves falling Losing shade

Max_Darkling Joined Sat 03/29/08 Posts: 1166	Tue 05/20/08 11:02 AM
That is a very interesting poem. very cool dude

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Tue 05/20/08 11:05 AM
good write, my feelings at times

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Tue 05/20/08 11:11 AM
Never daggers From my eyes I will not come Wearing a disguise I am a woman That is true I can never Lie to you I have a heart Sweet and kind I hope it is Love you find {{{{{Nice write Jason!!}}}}}

FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Tue 05/20/08 11:12 AM


AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 05/20/08 02:18 PM
sweet J

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Tue 05/20/08 02:20 PM
BRAVO!!

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Tue 05/20/08 08:22 PM
just excellent even in diminished shelter

justmenoel Joined Thu 08/02/07 Posts: 3137	Tue 05/20/08 08:30 PM
awesome

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Wed 05/21/08 06:48 AM
Your Diverse ability in writing just amazes me,, Kudossssssssssssssssssssssssss

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