Topic: Where Are You
jenn_82's photo
Sat 02/10/07 05:55 AM
In this world I stand all alone
I look every where for you but you are gone
I need you I want you
I can't live with out you
You left me you are gone
So I am here to fight this world alone
I cry out for you
But all I see is empty skys so blue
Come back to me I need to be held
My heart is breaking but I am sure no one can tell
I cry out for you
But there is nothing I can do
Again I cry out for you
All I have is my heart that is so true
I surrender me
In hopes that you will see

:heart: Jenn :heart:

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Sat 02/10/07 07:16 AM
awwwwwwww jensad sad ..i feel for u, girl!!!..

DANE1973's photo
Sat 02/10/07 07:20 AM
It's good Jenn,Get it out of your system.Need to talk?

jenn_82's photo
Sat 02/10/07 07:24 AM
I love poems they help me to express my heart

DANE1973's photo
Sat 02/10/07 07:27 AM
That's the intention, sometimes you have to watch who you express it to
though.lol:tongue:

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Sat 02/10/07 07:32 AM
Thats good, dont bottle it up..i have a habit of doing that, not
good...flowerforyou

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Sat 02/10/07 07:44 AM
The touch
was the first to go.
There had come to me
a dare
not from you dear
mortal as I am,
and you the lily's throat
but pedals unfurl.
Sun
dances at the seams of the clouds.
The sky to the north
is calm,
warm orange in the afterglow
I gone to where the storm piles up.
Leaving you as a flower
that will soon reach
the pinnacle of its bloom.

DANE1973's photo
Sat 02/10/07 07:49 AM
Pb111, Please click on the blue highlighted Poems,section and click the
post topic button,to post this.I liked it and would like to have others
read it.But you just tagged someone elses work,by mistake.Thanks
Danelaugh ohwell

michael1313's photo
Sat 02/10/07 08:15 AM
good work JENNflowerforyou

jenn_82's photo
Sat 02/10/07 11:01 AM
thank you all you are all to kind

tallandtttanned's photo
Sat 02/10/07 11:04 AM
hey jenn how do u feel

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Sat 02/10/07 11:04 AM
good readin'. jenn

Cybear's photo
Sat 02/10/07 01:10 PM
Very nicely done Jenn.Vent and release gurl;that's exactly how it's
done.One of the great advantages in the Poetic society that provide this
emotional release for all of us creative souls.Keep up the good work
hon.Godspeed!Cybear.

Unfortunately,PB111 is not tagging by mistake because on his #11 post he
did the same to my friend Zero's work after she specifically requested
for people not to.He's ignorant and unthoughtful;so now he is on the
icky~demon watch list.mad We'll be watching you cyber~punk.

jenn_82's photo
Sun 02/11/07 12:10 PM
I thank you all