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just having some fun when I worte this poem
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I see this alot in my dreams
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and just the other night too
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That is awesome Michael i missed it ,i have missed alot of the poems you
guys posted ,must be getting old anyway it is beautiful |
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thanx Marilyn...
OLD? you are as young as you feel can I feel how young you are? |
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so...is that a yes?
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Thank You SCG
did you dream last night? |
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yes...
(In the Night... |
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I saw that!
nice work |
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SCG...
read your poem about the dance in your dream... this poem reminds me of that night |
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VERY GOOD PIECE..
take out the filler words ..see how it flys |
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Thanx Raven...
I'll take that into consideration |
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Raven,thanx for that idea,but I'll leave it like it is...
didn't give the full message I hoped for |
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this poem gives me goose bumps
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