Topic: May Never Come to Be
creationsfire's photo
Thu 02/08/07 04:22 PM
Michael wooed my into posting. This may not be the poem he thought I
should post, but I hope he and all of you like it.


May Never Come to Be

In a thought my heart is broken
Wanting what can never be
I know my thoughts betray
At every turn I feel your touch
Longing for that kiss
That will never come to be
Wishing on a star
That isn’t there
Wrapped in misery
Remembering our short time
So many years ago
Desperately wanting
Knowing you aren’t mine
Curling around my soul
Another time of waiting
Not knowing what may come
Sweet God in heaven
Please
Leave me a portion
Of the one I love
Save a little taste of him
To wet my tongue
Tasting the will to love
The will to wait
Let me remember
without tears
This time I had
a chance
I let it go
Remorse for my choices
I long for that kiss
that may
Never come to be

~Karen~
© 2006

no photo
Thu 02/08/07 04:27 PM
:heart: flowerforyou Great Job Karen!!!!drinker

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 02/08/07 04:30 PM
Very nice I liked that one you should
post more flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Thu 02/08/07 04:31 PM
Karen really nice workflowerforyou

michael1313's photo
Thu 02/08/07 04:40 PM
Bravo!flowerforyou

I knew they would like it:wink:

DANE1973's photo
Thu 02/08/07 04:41 PM
That was truly great Karen, I hope you have more like this one.happy

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Thu 02/08/07 04:41 PM
Karen, I'm glad Michel wooed ya into it! Great girl! Hope to see more
from you.happy

michael1313's photo
Thu 02/08/07 04:41 PM
your poetry is a work of artflowerforyou

Gryphyn's photo
Thu 02/08/07 04:42 PM
I am glad to see you posting some of your work, I am glad you decided to
join us here.glasses

:)

G

ToyotaGirl's photo
Thu 02/08/07 04:49 PM
Karen, that was a very good poem. Nice work.

Fanta46's photo
Thu 02/08/07 04:55 PM
great words, Karen

creationsfire's photo
Thu 02/08/07 04:57 PM
I'm just stunned and completely awed by all of your supoort and
appreciation. All of you; thank you. If I can get past my shyness, I'll
drop in another poem. You are all so warm and thank you. But Micheal is
the true poet in this group!

michael1313's photo
Thu 02/08/07 04:58 PM
show us another one?

PLEASE???flowerforyou

michael1313's photo
Thu 02/08/07 05:01 PM
we are all true poets in here...

we all feel it and write it upon a page,
from the heart,by true poets like youflowerforyou


poetry to me is a work of artsmokin

creationsfire's photo
Thu 02/08/07 05:06 PM
Then Micheal, you are a true artist:heart:

creationsfire's photo
Thu 02/08/07 05:06 PM
Then Micheal, you are a true artist:heart:

michael1313's photo
Thu 02/08/07 07:58 PM
blushing
Thank You,the pleasure is mine,
to read good poetryflowerforyou