Topic: May Never Come to Be | |
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Michael wooed my into posting. This may not be the poem he thought I
should post, but I hope he and all of you like it. May Never Come to Be In a thought my heart is broken Wanting what can never be I know my thoughts betray At every turn I feel your touch Longing for that kiss That will never come to be Wishing on a star That isn’t there Wrapped in misery Remembering our short time So many years ago Desperately wanting Knowing you aren’t mine Curling around my soul Another time of waiting Not knowing what may come Sweet God in heaven Please Leave me a portion Of the one I love Save a little taste of him To wet my tongue Tasting the will to love The will to wait Let me remember without tears This time I had a chance I let it go Remorse for my choices I long for that kiss that may Never come to be ~Karen~ © 2006 |
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Great Job Karen!!!!
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Very nice I liked that one you should
post more |
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Karen really nice work
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Bravo!
I knew they would like it |
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That was truly great Karen, I hope you have more like this one.
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Karen, I'm glad Michel wooed ya into it! Great girl! Hope to see more
from you. |
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your poetry is a work of art
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I am glad to see you posting some of your work, I am glad you decided to
join us here. :) G |
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Karen, that was a very good poem. Nice work.
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great words, Karen
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I'm just stunned and completely awed by all of your supoort and
appreciation. All of you; thank you. If I can get past my shyness, I'll drop in another poem. You are all so warm and thank you. But Micheal is the true poet in this group! |
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show us another one?
PLEASE??? |
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we are all true poets in here...
we all feel it and write it upon a page, from the heart,by true poets like you poetry to me is a work of art |
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Then Micheal, you are a true artist
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Then Micheal, you are a true artist
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Thank You,the pleasure is mine, to read good poetry |
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