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Topic: You won't move
will6 Joined Thu 09/07/06 Posts: 1212	Thu 02/08/07 10:27 AM
You won't move You hold me still Dangling by threads You never will Past participles Negative vows Sometime you will Nowhere Nohow Where are you now Never here But always here Creating fear What you do best Cease to exist A hand outstretched Turns to a fist Pounding my heart You take it in stride A love always lost Innocence denied Whyte widow Screaming In the back of my mind The sickness abates Returning in time Swinging softly End of my rope Disappearing again Leaving no note>> WILL

jokerjoann Joined Sat 12/02/06 Posts: 115	Thu 02/08/07 11:02 AM
Oh..so strong

jokerjoann Joined Sat 12/02/06 Posts: 115	Thu 02/08/07 11:03 AM
Oh ....So Strong yet a chill..

michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Thu 02/08/07 11:22 AM
Powerful words Will

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76461	Thu 02/08/07 11:31 AM
Sorry for your pain Will

will6 Joined Thu 09/07/06 Posts: 1212	Thu 02/08/07 11:50 AM
thanks Kristi..WILL

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