walking through darkness no where to turn
walking through darkness when do i learn
how many times do i hit that brick wall
how many times do i have to fall
everyone says just pick yourself back up
sometimes i just want to tell them to shut the h*** up
i knew all the things i needed to do
i knew i could never be with you
that didnt mean i wanted to agree or wanted to listen
sometimes i just thought i would be forgiven
when you keep saying such nice things to me
trying to hang on to what it should be
oh how i knew you really didnt care
so now im running away going anywhere
you knew all about me you knew my past too
why do you hurt me like you do
thought i could make it work just for the kids
now i cant stand you after all you did
not wanting me to be on my own
not trying to take care of our home
one day ill forgive you because thats who i am
ill just never be with you because you just didnt give a damn
now im out there making it without you
i dont need your games or your screwed up life anymore
i may never find someone that sfor shure
trust me im glad i finally got a clue
you cant manipulate me the way you do
living in the insanity as long as we domay be one day ill find someone
new
maybe theyll treat me better than you
someone whos honest sincere compationate and true
always someone who i can talk with too
always and forever we will be whole
a happy life is forever my ultimate goal

WRITTEN BY/sharon/daddysgirlforever

i really tried to rack my brain for a title so if u got any ideas please
i need them
thankyou

Seeing as how you start with being in the dark and end with finding
somebody who will treat you right how about"From Darkness to Light"

Me I would call it "Bad-Bye", but im wierd!!!!! LOL.

You could call-it, "from blind to seeing"

Or, Just plain, "been-their,ain't doing that".?

Its a good poem though and alot have been through that pain!!

How about "Out of the Darkness"?

gamail50 said a good one.but karmafury hit the nail a little too hard.
the title karma suggested a really good title.

thanks karma and gamail both sound really good now to decide which one

i would go with untitled,the best never really give names 2 thier art
they let it speak 4 its self

thanks sean ill keep take that into concideration

How about..."Your Chance to Fly"

or "Life without You"

Nice poem from your heart!
that's what we like to see,from the heart