Topic: Cheaters Punishment
isaac_dede's photo
Tue 05/13/08 04:43 AM
Edited by isaac_dede on Tue 05/13/08 04:44 AM
You chose to cheat
Stopped my heartbeat
Found it hard to believe
And my heart did bleed
You had a good thing
You even had the ring
Our vows you did brake
Now you say it was a mistake
For now you know,
You were just another, in his long row
Now your asking to come back
Hoping I will cut you slack
To ask this,you have some nerve
But you got what you deserved
Yes I know he gave you AIDS.
But this is the bed you made.
In it you will have to lye.
All alone until you die.

ADiamond's photo
Tue 05/13/08 04:48 AM
Very Deep:cry: , very earlyyawn , very good.......flowerforyou

isaac_dede's photo
Tue 05/13/08 04:55 AM
thanx diamond. It's not early for me..almost time to get off work!

no photo
Tue 05/13/08 04:55 AM
kind a stupid thing say but weirdos everywhere

isaac_dede's photo
Tue 05/13/08 04:57 AM

kind a stupid thing say but weirdos everywhere
huh

Mischa's photo
Tue 05/13/08 05:02 AM
i found it to be sad and realistic. i enjoy your poetry.

isaac_dede's photo
Tue 05/13/08 05:03 AM

i found it to be sad and realistic. i enjoy your poetry.

thank youflowerforyou

pkh's photo
Tue 05/13/08 05:31 AM
wow good write but yet sad.They don't know what they have till its gone