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is a rose real?
does it not have petals,and a sweet scent? if it pricks us,do we not bleed? it will not be forced,into submission, but will open to the kiss of morning dew, and the soft touch of sunshine on it's leaves, with a mothers love and care, cool waters from the spring of life, room to grow and bloom, into a true Beauty to behold... |
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a rose is a rose...is a rose..
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good one thankyou m1313
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thank you for the inspiration...
just my way of giving some back to my friends |
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that and I just like writing about roses
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very pretty!
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thank You
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Awesome Michael as usual
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take two poems,a shot of something smooth,\_/
and call on me, if you still have questions |
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Beautiful,Michael as usual.I must admit I'm leaning on the correlation
of a mothers love and care heavily.Very nice. |
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Good one M.
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didn't shakespear write something similar
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he may have...
sounded familier when I thought of it but I couldn't remember all th words to Shakespear's work... don't really know where this came from... it just popped in my head,so I wrote it down |
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very pretty michael..again... |
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Thank You
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I have seen this.... in Merchant of Venise You may want to check it out
Mike.... if its there you may have to ask Van to take it down. Scene 3 act 1 I think.... if I remember my shakespear right. |
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oops Act 3 Scene 1.... I am not myself tonight.... sorry
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worded like mine Ms.Tneal?
this just popped in my head the other day,so I thought I'd share it with everybody... is there a website where I can read that play/script? |
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I just did Mike. She's quite right. Your third line is just about word
for word. Is it possible you've read some Shakespeare recently and some may have stuck? It is good though. |
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Doesn't really matter M.
it was beautiful, and words from your heart. |
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