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Topic: is it real?
michael1313's photo
Mon 02/05/07 11:23 PM
is a rose real?
does it not have petals,and a sweet scent?
if it pricks us,do we not bleed?

it will not be forced,into submission,
but will open to the kiss of morning dew,
and the soft touch of sunshine on it's leaves,

with a mothers love and care,
cool waters from the spring of life,
room to grow and bloom,
into a true Beauty to behold...

mtironroses's photo
Mon 02/05/07 11:31 PM
a rose is a rose...is a rose..

no photo
Mon 02/05/07 11:38 PM
good one thankyou m1313

michael1313's photo
Mon 02/05/07 11:42 PM
thank you for the inspiration...

just my way of giving some back to my friendsflowerforyou

michael1313's photo
Tue 02/06/07 09:37 AM
that and I just like writing about rosessmokin

venusrose's photo
Tue 02/06/07 10:24 AM
very pretty!

michael1313's photo
Tue 02/06/07 02:56 PM
thank Youflowerforyou

songbirrd's photo
Tue 02/06/07 04:29 PM
Awesome Michael as usual flowerforyou

michael1313's photo
Tue 02/06/07 04:39 PM
take two poems,a shot of something smooth,\_/
and call on me, if you still have questionssmokin

Cybear's photo
Tue 02/06/07 04:52 PM
Beautiful,Michael as usual.I must admit I'm leaning on the correlation
of a mothers love and care heavily.Very nice.:smile:

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 02/06/07 05:06 PM
Good one M.flowerforyou

theronin75's photo
Tue 02/06/07 05:36 PM
didn't shakespear write something similar

michael1313's photo
Tue 02/06/07 05:49 PM
he may have...
sounded familier when I thought of it but I couldn't remember all th
words to Shakespear's work...laugh

don't really know where this came from...
it just popped in my head,so I wrote it downsmokin

sandylou2456's photo
Tue 02/06/07 05:51 PM



very pretty michael..again...

michael1313's photo
Tue 02/06/07 06:12 PM
Thank Youflowerforyou

Tneal's photo
Tue 02/06/07 07:40 PM
I have seen this.... in Merchant of Venise You may want to check it out
Mike.... if its there you may have to ask Van to take it down.

Scene 3 act 1 I think.... if I remember my shakespear right.

Tneal's photo
Tue 02/06/07 07:46 PM
oops Act 3 Scene 1.... I am not myself tonight.... sorry

michael1313's photo
Tue 02/06/07 08:46 PM
worded like mine Ms.Tneal?

this just popped in my head the other day,so I thought I'd share it with
everybody...

is there a website where I can read that play/script?

karmafury's photo
Tue 02/06/07 08:49 PM
I just did Mike. She's quite right. Your third line is just about word
for word. Is it possible you've read some Shakespeare recently and some
may have stuck? It is good though.

mtironroses's photo
Tue 02/06/07 08:51 PM
Doesn't really matter M.
it was beautiful, and words from your heart.

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