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A poets soul,
With a lovers touch, You look into his eyes, Gazing longingly, Yearning to feel his desire, Falling,falling, Breathlessly,you ache, Fearing that it is a dream, Knowing nothing of the world, Neither Heaven or hell around you, You hurt still you need more, Feeling his soul flow through you, Lingering in his kiss, The softest caress, The slightest whisper, Enhanced now to a symphony, Falling,falling, Into each others arms, Exhausted to the core, Love is savage, Dane 2/5/07 |
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waoooooo Dane!!!that is beautiful !!! keep on writing man!!!
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Ty Morena,just one attempt amoungst many.
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good work Dane!!!
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TY Micheal, I was hoping La mom would see it.I know how much she likes
these.LOl |
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Very Good Dane, You have the Bards touch.
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 You Rawk! 
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Awesome guy keep up the good work!
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A big thank you to those who have read this,I hope it stirred your
souls.And an even bigger one to those who have responded.(((hugs))) I love you guys,you have become my family and I wouldn't miss a day. |
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Ahh so beautiful Dane ...really diggin it!!
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    Dane, got nuttin but mad luv for you! 
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awesome poem dane thanks fo sharing it
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(((Dane))))
Beautiful Dane,,, Felt deep in my Soul!!! I only hope this is a beginning I enjoy reading your thoughts, heart and soul... Thank You Dane!
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