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Topic: Seems a Vortex
angelinboots Joined Sun 03/02/08 Posts: 90	Thu 05/08/08 10:45 AM
Tattered hopes Torn dreams Twisted promises Swirling vortex; Not as it seems. Sucks my breath Tears apart seams Shatter' release Pulls me away From all of me. Fury outside Inside to cease God in the eye Hurricane's blast The core at peace.

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MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Thu 05/08/08 10:47 AM
excellent

angelinboots Joined Sun 03/02/08 Posts: 90	Thu 05/08/08 10:54 AM
Thank you for the encouragement to share

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Thu 05/08/08 11:08 AM
You know what they say, well I don't either, so I'm making this up: God is great, God is good, if he can't do it, no one could. Good Write

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 05/08/08 11:11 AM


pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Thu 05/08/08 11:13 AM
very nice sweetie

angelinboots Joined Sun 03/02/08 Posts: 90	Thu 05/08/08 12:41 PM
You know what they say, well I don't either, so I'm making this up: God is great, God is good, if he can't do it, no one could. Good Write that was sweet I really like a lot of people here. We don't have to agree to like each other, which makes it even more special when we do

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Thu 05/08/08 08:46 PM

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