Topic: Have a nice day
isaac_dede's photo
Thu 05/08/08 04:13 AM
I know you don’t care
Of the life we were to share
Or of the gown you were to wear

For my heart you have shattered
Leaving its pieces lying scattered
Not that it really matters

For they didn’t take long to clean
And your true nature I have seen
You’re a b!tch, not a queen.

Now please just go away.
But before you are on your way
I have one more thing to say
“f*ck you, and have a nice a day!”

FroznChild's photo
Thu 05/08/08 04:18 AM
Simply Diarettic of great poetry!
Loved the form,
the simplicity,
and the absolute Directness.

Rock on! Thanks for sharing!

isaac_dede's photo
Thu 05/08/08 04:19 AM
thank you frozn

kc0003's photo
Thu 05/08/08 04:27 AM
right to the point huh?

isaac_dede's photo
Thu 05/08/08 04:33 AM

right to the point huh?

Yep sometimes that's the best way.

johncarl's photo
Thu 05/08/08 04:37 AM
i might have to send this to someone very dear to my heart.my heart will for ever be scared from her.i forgive but never forgetdevil

isaac_dede's photo
Thu 05/08/08 04:40 AM

i might have to send this to someone very dear to my heart.my heart will for ever be scared from her.i forgive but never forgetdevil

Go ahead pass the love around laugh

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 05/08/08 08:01 PM
Right to the point!